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Two Become One grotto 14/03/03(Mon)10:20 No. 21280 [Reply] [Last 50 posts]

Hey, I'm grotto and here's the current version of Two Become One. I originally wrote this story to be posted on 4chan's /d/. The version posted on Oblimo's site here ( http://oblimo.pbworks.com/w/page/5537707/Two-Become-One ) is from summer 2008, and what appears here has been edited significantly since then. Please enjoy... As always, I have many ideas for the story that I've been nursing for years, but I can't promise new chapters within any reasonable timeframe. I will post them when I write them.

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Sara sat on her bed, still not quite able to believe what she was hearing. The person beside her seemed to be a ten-year-old girl, wearing a loose gray t-shirt, short brown hair and a baseball cap. "See, feel me, I'm just like normal, right?" Sara hesitantly reached out her hand and grabbed the girl's wrist. She could feel the bones in her arm, the pulse in her veins.

"Ok, now watch." The girl leaned forward and closed her eyes. In less than a second, gigantic breasts swelled into being on her boyish frame, stretching the fabric of the t-shirt. They were ludicrously large, puffing out into mounds around her areolae - C-cups in their own right - and the nipples were clearly visible, erect, three-quarters of an inch wide. The new breasts jiggled with their own momentum as the girl gently shook them back and forth. "Feel them if you want," she said. Sara reached out a hand and patted the monster on the left. It yielded and swayed around a bit. She began to knead, feeling the soft, warm boob tissue, not any different from her own except for the size. Still disbelieving, Sara reached down and tweaked the prominent, hard nipple. It was a firm nub, yielding a bit to her when squeezed, different from the soft breast tissue. The girl let out a squeak of laughter.

"That's too odd," said Sara. "It's not just boobs," said the girl. For a split second, her body lost all its detail, decohering in a blobby mass. She reformed a second later. Now the girl had deep red hair, tied back in a ponytail, wisps escaping to float in the afternoon sun that came down through the window. Gone were the ludicrous breasts. Her face was vaguely similar to before, but now she seemed to be six or seven years older. The T-shirt and jeans had become a beautiful dark green velvet dress, matching her eyes, cut to expose a hint of pearly cleavage. Although she was hardly recognizable, she had the same playful glint in her eyes.

"I can control pretty much everything about myself." the girl said. "Feel the dress." Sara reached out and took some fabric, rubbed it in between her fingers. It felt like fine fuzzy velvet. The girl smiled. "That's as much a part of me as my body or my Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Anon 18/04/12(Thu)22:55 No. 25505

Where can I find more second skin fetish stuff like this


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Anonymous 21/03/08(Mon)06:43 No. 27211

>>25505
I don't know about second skin shapeshifters, but one of my favorite stories with similar themes to this one is Eudaemon by Evil Dolly. To reveal what exactly is similar to this story would kind of be a spoiler, so I'll just give what I imagine would be the book jacket summary: A reporter goes undercover as a prisoner in a certain city's experimental criminal justice program in an effort to expose what she expects will be a pattern of extrajudicial abuse of convicts. What she finds will be more strange than anything she thought was possible.

http://www.evil-dolly.com/assets/eudeamon.pdf


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Anonymous 21/06/09(Wed)08:15 No. 27266

>>27211
God fucking dammit its name is winter and it's mute.

Good story though.




A Loving Family (Mg bg inc cons oral anal rim) WorldsGreatestDad 19/02/14(Thu)00:19 No. 25958 [Reply] [First 100 posts] [Last 50 posts]

I wrote this for my own entertainment, and I thought some of you might enjoy it too. Please pay attention to the tags, as my tastes are not for everyone, and I wouldn’t want anyone to be scarred for life because something I wrote squicked them to death! Constructive comments welcome, but don’t bother telling me what a sick bastard I am or anything else I don’t already know. And needless to say, this is a total work of fiction, and any resemblance to any person, living or dead, or any actual place or events, is completely coincidental.

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So after dinner I’m kicked all the way back in my big old overstuffed recliner, sipping a beer and watching some dumb show, not really paying attention. I have a big sheet over the whole chair because I’m naked as usual, and the plastic chair covering isn’t very comfortable on bare skin. Just as I’m trying to decide whether to see what else is on cable or put on a porno, my 10-year-old daughter wanders into the living room, apparently bored with whatever she was doing in her room. She’s also naked as usual, nudity being more common than being dressed in our house. She glances at the TV, then comes over and leans against the recliner arm. I grin down at her and reach around to tousle her long blond hair.

“Hi Daddy”, she chirps adorably.

“Hi Angel”, I respond.

She’s lean and lithe, with a cute face just beginning to become beautiful. She reminds me so much of her late mother, who died very suddenly from an illness a couple of years ago. After a few seconds, she clambers up onto the wide pillowy chair arm and flops half onto it, half onto my left side, resting her head on my shoulder. My left hand naturally falls onto her little butt and I give it an affectionate squeeze. She gives me a peck on the cheek and rests her hand on my chest.

Obviously, having her naked body lying against my naked body was starting to have an affect on me. She was idly playing with my sparse chest hairs and happened to glance down toward the TV. In the process, she noticed that I was slowly growing a chubby. This wasn’t at all surprising or remarkable to her. Her mother and I had been very upfront about sex, allowing our lovemaking to be seen and heard as a matter of course; just another aspect of our tender affection for each other. However, now that it had my daughter’s attention, she reached down and clasped my dick lightly, then rolled it back and forth a little as it became fat and heavy in her small hand.

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WorldsGreatstDad 21/03/17(Wed)00:18 No. 27217

>>27202
Guess I'll try a new thread. So if anyone has a favorite story on the last page they'd better bump it up now.


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Shadow 21/06/06(Sun)23:34 No. 27264

>>27217
If you're still there, I'd say it's safe enough to go ahead and set up a new thread. If you still wish to, that is, and I hope you do.


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WGD 21/06/09(Wed)05:07 No. 27265

>>27264
I tried, and was immediately autobanned once again. I decided to wait until someone else bumped the story to give the bad news. I don't know what is causing the ban, so I'm not using my previous name or any other identifying information, and this probably still won't go through. Anyway, I'm still not getting enough free time to really develop the story in the direction I want it to go, even though I do have some pretty good ideas, if I say so myself. So if the opportunity presents itself, I may try again. We'll see.




Leprechaun Gashnaw 21/05/20(Thu)06:26 No. 27248 [Reply]

Posting first chapter. See the response I get.

Leprechaun

F/F, BDSM, Gangbang, Non-con, underage

Chapter 1:

Look at her, that sweet sixteen-year-old girl asleep in my arms. Hard to believe it has only been a year. I really do love Alicia, sure I may have resented the arrangement at first, after all our parents did not truly respect me, and Alicia, well she was their golden child. Everything was easy for her. Even getting into a prestigious school. When I was called up and told that they could not afford the dorm costs, I almost laughed an hung up. Was even closer when they ask if I could arrange a place for Alicia to stay during her time at the school. It wasn’t until they offered to pay part of the rent. We did not exactly have the room, four roommates already crammed into a three-person apartment, bringing a fifth was not appealing.
“Is Alicia free to play?” My roommate asked opening my door.
“I think she’s asleep” I responded calmly. Even if the girl was not, I did not want to let go of her. Like I said I love Alicia, and even if Alicia does not mind getting fucked by my roommates on a daily basis, I do have a slight issue.
My roommate frowned and left.
“Jade, I’m not asleep” Alicia responded. I looked down at this crystal blue eyes looking back up at me. Those eyes were huge, I always seemed to lose myself in them.
“It’s okay babe, just get some rest” I responded quietly kissing her. Maybe I should back up a bit though. You see, Alicia and I did not always see eye to eye. As I said I didn’t even want to take her in. This story would be different if I said no. If I told them, we just did not have the room, they may have told Alicia no. The first time they would ever say that to her, simply due to not being able to afford it. But I said yes. I agreed to take in my sister despite my resentment towards her. Thankfully, I don’t regret it at all, not anymore. So How about I go back to that point, as the story before than was not really in interest…

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Mikey Part 1 MikeyAndMe!BUf3a8nZe6 20/05/26(Tue)05:50 No. 26764 [Reply]

This is one chapter out of a larger story I'm working on. The plan is to connect various scenes, based upon (but not strictly true to) my sexual experiences as a preteen. All characters in this scene are (were) real. The basic plot really did happen, but has been filled in either for lack of clear memory or literary embellishment. I will post more later. Comments welcome.

Tags: preteen loli shota straight gay bbg

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Mikey Part 1

“Come to church with me. We'll get laid.”

Jeez, where did it start with Mikey?

Church, I guess. Ain't that ironic?

See, Mikey was home-schooled so he didn't know any of the in-school kids I knew, except those who lived near us. That's how we met. Hanging around the neighborhood playground park.
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Confessions of Dan'l Chap 1 Pt 2 MikeyAndMe!BUf3a8nZe6 21/02/02(Tue)05:53 No. 27165

Dan'l continues his story of the Harrison School Three.

Tags: mg bg rape sex anal violence

I had wondered why the pizza seemed kind of old and cold by the time they got home.

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There and then, I did not know that Tuna had taken a beating a couple of hours ago. Nor did I know how long Jenny and Rhonda had been lying in the dark. Lastly, I did not know that seeing me in the shelter was their first realization of just what this was all about.

Dad paced back and forth in front of the girls, like a sergeant inspecting a line of troops.

"Are these the girls who beat you up?" he asked me.

Getting beat up by girls sounded shameful to the middle school mind, so I mumbled quietly when I said, "Yeah, that's them."
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Confessions of Dan'l Chap 1 Pt 3 MikeyAndMe!BUf3a8nZe6 21/03/02(Tue)05:24 No. 27207

Bap! Bap! Bap! went the knock on the door. "Hey, you guys done in there?" yelled Dad from the other side. "Come on out if you are! Without your clothes!"

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Rhonda followed me through the door, into the more brightly lit kitchen area of the other pod. Both of us being completely nude, it felt rather embarassing that everyone in the room turned their heads to look at us. Tuna, still bound underneath the bench; Dad, sitting on the bench; Jenny, lying hogtied on the floor by the stove. Jenny's nose and mouth were bleeding. I guess Dad had punched or kicked her in the face while tying her back up.

"Over here," Dad commanded. All eyes followed us as we stepped in front of him.

"Did you make him happy?" he asked Rhonda.

She looked at me a moment, so I nodded at her. "Yes, sir. I think I did."

"You think you did." Dad reached out to examine her crotch, feeling the drying juice on her pussy and inner thighs. He sniffed his fingers. "Hmm. Okay."

He looked at me next. "Dan'l, did she make you happy?"
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Confessions of Dan'l Chap 1 Pt 4 MikeyAndMe!BUf3a8nZe6 21/03/13(Sat)05:52 No. 27215

Okay, this will wrap up Chapter 1 of this violent child rapey murder stuff. We'll get back to Mikey and Katie and friends next I promise.

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"Don't you fucking dare!" growled Tuna.

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That was enough of a challenge for me. My mood right then said whatever would piss her off more was good by me. So I slid down to where I was sitting on her thighs and undid the snap and zipper on her jeans. She tried to throw me off by kicking her legs, but I sort of rode her like a bucking horse.

"Pull her pants off," I told Dad. I held her down by the belly and shoulders while he tugged at the ankles of her jeans.

"No, nooo!" she whined as the jeans slid off her legs. Her hands, tied behind her back, grabbed hold of her white panties, but that wasn't hard to yank from her grip. "God damn it, no!" I avoided her kicks by prying my whole body between her legs.

This dominance game stiffened my boner up even more. I shoved my open pants further down my legs. With my knees, I pushed her thighs apart and wiggled my hips into place. With one hand, I guided my dick to her hole. I was not at all interested in getting her wet and ready.

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Story from 10+ years ago Anonymous 21/02/19(Fri)04:37 No. 27194 [Reply]

Hi, does anyone remember the story where this teenage girl sunbathing or something and the neighbor's dog goes in on her. and she ends up being spotted by the neighbor's kid which causes her to be blackmailed.




Fuzzy's Smut Anonymous 21/01/13(Wed)23:07 No. 27130 [Reply]

Hey perves! Come check out my stuff!

I've been thinking dirty thoughts for decades, but only recently decided to type and post them for posterity! So hey, come on in and enjoy. Please forgive outside links, but we all make do right?

Do you like raceplay and straight shotacon? I got you covered.
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Maybe cut out the raceplay, and just get a more dominant shota?
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Are you a big tough guy who pines for femboi-pussy?
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Jumping Hotdog's Stories JumpingHotdog 19/02/13(Wed)19:25 No. 25953 [Reply]

I've been posting my stories to ASSTR for a while now, but since ASSTR is pretty much dead as far as comments go, I'm trying to branch out and post in some new places too.

Chiefly my stories focus on mind control, BDSM and young girls.

My ASSTR archive is here

https://www.asstr.org/~JumpingHotdog/index.html

And I'll post my new stories below.


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JumpingHotdog 19/06/07(Fri)11:42 No. 26081

>>26049
Thanks!

I've got a few stories in the works. Not sure when they'll be done, though. They are longer, multi chapter works and I'm holding off on posting until I've got more done.

>>26078

Thanks a bunch! I can't think of any gdom on men/boy stories. It's a rather rare genre. I remember reading some stories by Young_Lesbian_Femdom on ASSTR years ago but they were gdom on women.


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JumpingHotdog 20/12/30(Wed)18:06 No. 27110

==Jumping Hotdog's Camp Mentempuer - Day One==

>Twelve year old Bianca wakes up to find herself on a strange island. She soon meets a talking parrot, is told she must overcome diverse challenges and faces her first dangerous enemy. More importantly, she learns the island is no adventure story from a young adult novel. Beset by vicious enemies set on sexual violation, Bianca's only hope lies in reaching Camp Mentempuer, but might the camp contain even greater horrors than the guards set to keep her from it?

This is an older story but stayed tuned. New chapter coming right up.

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Bianca looked around. Two dozen girls filled the beach, none appearing older than twelve. None wore a stitch of clothing, making guessing their ages easy. They lay like discarded dolls on the sand. Some were face down, little-girl asses in the air, while others were face up, small or nonexistent titties on display.

A tiny black girl lay near the tide line. The serf washed in and rolled over her toes before pulling back. Her dark skin glimmered with salty sheen. She didn't stir and only the slight rise and fall of her flat, bare chest spoke to her continued life.

Despite that sparkle, Bianca couldn't take her eyes off the black girl's cunny. It was so small and, well, black, so very different from her own pink pussy. Butterflies battered her stomach, so many of them, and she didn't know what to do.

A parrot flapped down from the sky and landed on the sand. Bianca used the commotion to tear her eyes from the other girl's private parts. At first the parrot didn't notice Bianca. It fluttered its brilliant blue and red wings and then walked among the sleeping girls.
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JumpingHotdog 20/12/30(Wed)18:10 No. 27111

==Jumping Hotdog's Camp Mentempuer - Day Two==

Codes: fg, Mg, best, oral, mast, bond, rape, ds, fdom, mc, tf, breast, viol

> Bianca begins her second day at the terrifying Camp Mentempuer. To see out the day Bianca must over come deadly showers, powerful rapists and her own traitorous body. Can she triumph over the sadistic mistresses or is even survival too high a price?

And there we go! Day Two. Something new. I can now officially say I’ve wrote *something* in 2020. Year officially saved.

~#~

The loud cry of a bell woke Bianca. It was morning, the next morning, the day after her life changed forever. The bell's long high note rolled through her flesh and made her shiver. The night before that very bell had seized control of her body and forced her to eat the most disgusting meal of her life. Even now, hours later, her stomach still roiled. She had barely survived one day at Camp Mentempuer; how could she possibly survive another?

Dawn light broke through the cabin's windows, revealing the pornography plastered to the walls. It was even on the ceiling. Hanging partly off the bed, Bianca looked up and saw a women so beautiful it took her breath away. She could have been a supermodel, with darkly bronzed mixed race skin and almost black almond eyes. Vivid white ropes bit into her body, deep and tight. The red marks of a whip or crop covered her front, particularly concentrated on her small but shapely breasts. Her eyes shone with a strange submissive strength and her two front teeth bit into her plump lip. Strangely, in this room of hideous abuse, she almost gloried in her bondage and pain. Bianca wasn't sure if the poster was the best or worst thing in the room.

Beckie poked her head out of her bed and looked down at Bianca. The black girl smiled. They'd elected to share a bunk bed, with Beckie taking the top and Bianca the bottom.
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My girlfriend's cock is bigger than mine. Anonymous 20/07/27(Mon)00:41 No. 26909 [Reply]

I met my girlfriend on the beach, of all places. I had come out of a bad relationship a few months prior, unsurprisingly related to my tiny cock. My then girl just got bored of it I guess, but it might have been my constant bitching and self inflicted deprecation, who knows. In any case I met Cassandra at the beach.

She was on a lazy chair sunbathing and I was playing with my dog. I threw his ball but the wind caught it and fell next to her. She was startled when a huge hyperenergetic golden retriever jumped at her searching for it. I ran to apologize and had to grab Mr Woofer by the collar.

"Sorry miss," I said, she was shockingly beautiful, long dark hair, big puffy lips with a smile waiting to shine, dark green-brown eyes, a huge pair of tits that she showcased to all to see on a tied two part bikini, and between her legs, the largest bulge I had seen on a girl outside of the internet.

"Don't worry pretty boy," she said winking and started to pet my dog, "whose a nice boi? eh? whose a nice boi?" She said while petting him.

"Umh, hi," I awkwardly said, she took her eyes out of the dog and smiled at me, "I'm Jonathan, people call me Jon." I extended a hand to her. She kept smiling looking up at me from her lower point of view. "Nice to meet you Jon," she took my hand and grabbed it stronger using me to pull herself up. "Name's Cassandra."

She was taller than me, she was all better than me, just by what her bulge said. And she wasn't even erect yet.

"Always get your dog to do your wingman work Jon?" She winked at me, her prescense was overwhelming. It was like being next to a greek goddess.

"What? No! I... It was an accident I swea--" She interrupted me by laughing, "Relax pretty boy," she repeated her compliment of earlier. Her hand went to my shoulder and she gently shooked it. "I'm teasing you Jon."
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Nick Fan 20/07/29(Wed)14:00 No. 26921

This is really excellent. Thank you for posting, and please keep it going!


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part+4 20/08/01(Sat)02:48 No. 26924

The next morning came later, my face was stuck to the skin of her neck by the dried cum. I moved my hand to rub my eyes and in the way there it bumped one of her massive tits. So I let it there and started to caress her nipple. I also started to kiss her neck.

"Good morning pretty boy," she said to me with fun in her voice.

"Good morning beautiful," I answered kissing her in the lips. She returned the kiss. We stood there kissing with my hands teasing her tits for a long while. I looked down at her crotch and her boner was there, poking to the gods.

My ass was still somewhat sore of last night abuse, but my mind disregarded it and I took another bottle of lube that was next to the bed. She smiled at me showing her teeth and asking me, "Are you sure?"

I nodded, pouring a generous amount of lube on her. I stroked her morning wood a few times to get it all distributed and straddled up. Cowboy position. I took her cock and guided it right to the opening of my ass. And slowly, very slowly, got it all inside. My balls and cock resting hard on her toned belly.

"Ride me boy," she demanded. I obliged.

First very slowly, but soon with pneumatic rhythm that she seemed to enjoy, and my ass demanded. It was so delicious, like fitting something on a hole that has the perfect shape for it. I rode her cock as if it was all a dream and if I stopped it would end. She let me do all the job, letting me control the pleasure she received from my ass. I know she wanted to start pistoning more than once, I could see her muscles twitching, but she controlled herself, letting me get my pleasure as well.

"Oh god, Oh God!" she started saying, I could feel her trembling. My body was lost in the pleasure, my own cock trembling of unattended excitation, my eyes went back on my head and I started to push faster, my cock started to spew cum seconds before hers exploded inside of me. She was incredible.
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Anonymous 20/12/20(Sun)00:56 No. 27102

This is really excellent. Thank you for posting, and please keep it going!




V-Trigger (TF) fdisk 20/12/04(Fri)07:26 No. 27085 [Reply]

I was inspired by a story on here previously called "The Three Amigos" to write my own X-Change story. since OP seems to have vanished I figure now is as good a time as any. This is my first piece.

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You know, I never really got how stupid horniness made you until what happened to me last summer. Me, Duncan, and Nam played Street Fighter Alpha at my house while my parents were at work. We were inseparable, always playing fighting games, reading comics, or doing other mindless teen shit. Being young, dumb and horny brought us together in many ways. Nam always had connections to seedy underground Korean shit he got from his uncle. This meant we’d always have the hook up to all types of imported smut, comics, and games native to the country at the time. Duncan and I were 90% sure the shit was illegal but that only made it better.

One of the things Nam had that piqued our interest was X-Change. He had a bottle full of the stuff, stolen from his uncle’s trash after, according to Nam, his uncle got cold feet and decided to pass on them. Nam, who was a real chatter-shit when he knew about something, told us all about it.

“I’m telling you guys, this shit is the real deal! I saw one tape where a man took 1 pill” He shoves his finger into Duncan’s face. “JUST 1 PILL! Next thing you know this fuckin’ guy looks like Kate Winslet! If I take this shit, I’m gonna look like Hee-Sun!” “Who the FUCK is Hee-Sun, Nam?” Duncan blurts out jokingly in-between mashing nonsense on his controller. Now, I’m not the best fighting game player on the planet, but I definitely was the best player in the room. Nam and Duncan had a nasty habit of button-mashing with no strategy involved. Days would go by where I’d clean house, only to finally be beaten by Nam, with lots of grabs from Birdie on his side. Maybe I had a hidden talent for virtual tactility, or maybe it was because they didn’t have a PlayStation at home. In any case, today was shaping up to be no exception, as I nail the finishing rapid-kicks and K.O Duncan for the win.

“Fuckin’ hell! You see that Nam, your gay yappin’ cost me the damn game!” Nam and I were used to Duncan’s outbursts after losses, so Nam only responded with snickers. This, of course, only made Duncan more riled up. “I mean seriously, if you love those pills so fucking much just take one!” “Yeah, why not?” I chimed in. I normally don’t interject as much when the 3 of us are riffing. It’s not necessarily out of any fear or something, I just never feel the need to really get all that worked up. Nam took our questions with a very sly grin only a questionably raised Korean kid could pull off.

“How’s about a bet on the next game? Loser takes a pill and let me and the winner tear a hole into their newly minted snatch?” Duncan looked at him like he was an alien. “How’s about kiss my ass? Luke’s a goddamn c Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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fdisk 20/12/04(Fri)08:17 No. 27086

Nam goes for Birdie, while I choose Chun-Li, a character I always chose when I wanted to be at my best. The first round starts, and I can tell that this game was different. Nam played a lot smarter, blocking my combo attempts, and grabbing me while my character ended her move for a painful drop. My mind raced as I kept walking into his hits, and it wasn’t long before the first round ended.

“Holy shit Nam, you won the first round!” Duncan belted. “Now just do it again, and we can give ol’ Luke here rabies.” “Yeah yeah, after this don’t expect me to share the spoils” Nam interjects. I’d prefer challengers who didn’t pre-emptively declare victory, but for some reason the cocky, gun-sure attitude Nam had made me feel a lot weirder than normal. The second round felt longer, as I pulled out combos and juggles that seemed a little too tryhard considering the skill level of my opponent. Maybe it was the inner conflict I was having that pushed me to inevitably take the next win, or maybe it was adrenaline from the fear of the unknown; of what would happen next.

“Uh oh, 1-1. I think Nam is about to become our personal little Sailor Moon.”Duncans quips fall on deaf ears as we both focus for the final round. We both play in a way that was rare for anyone in the house. Perfect blocks, parrys, reversals, punishes, it seems almost robotic. It all culminated in something neither of us expected. An outcome that, in all my years of playing before or since, has never occurred again.

“What the fuck! No way.” We all sit there speechless.“A fucking draw.”

“Cheeky. Very cheeky.” Duncan laments.“Well, that wasn’t planned. When did you get so good, Nam?”I had to ask. Truthfully, I wouldn’t know if it was skill, luck, or my warped mindstate, that caused such an odd outcome. What I did know, however, was that I wanted that feeling again. It was the most fun I ever had playing Alpha and, arguably, video games in general. “HAHA a man such as myself always has a trick up his sleeve.” Nam's arrogance was something to behold, surely. Some would even call it cute.

“Bullshit. Hey, you know what?”Duncan grabs the bottle and shakes it around, as if it was a magic 8-ball giving him the answer to his own question. “How about this, if Luke beats you this time you gotta take this pill and let us both rail you?”After hearing him say that out loud I stared to think the couch and carpet had been laced with some horny powder. There was no way the Duncan from 10 minutes ago would have been so on-board with this scenario. “What’s in it for me, assbrain?” Nam matter-of-factly spat out at Duncan’s proposal. “Duh, Luke’s gotta take the pill. Then we can both rail him.”The pat on my shoulder he gave me immediately after should’ve rubbed me the wrong way. Alas, like the passing fart I am, I just said “That’s basically the same deal as before.” Message too long. Click here to view the full text.




iCity Tales by AnonyMPC (various tags, cyberpunk, violence) AnonyMPC 14/07/30(Wed)22:09 No. 22139 [Reply] [First 100 posts] [Last 50 posts]

Hi, I'm AnonyMPC. You might remember me from such stories as "My Private Camwhore," "Relatively Powered", and "Yet Another Thing That Isn't The Next My Private Camwhore."

Well, after a long time where I was working on various stories and making very slow progress, I got hit with an idea that caught my imagination on fire. It started with the artist NeckRomancer on HF, who drew a few pieces inspired my stories, and we got to talking. An offhanded comment by me made him suggest a story idea, a SF one that had a sort of cyberpunk vibe. It was a good idea, and I'm actually a fan of old-school cyberpunk and all it's tropes, but I didn't want to tackle it. I was too busy, and too far behind, with other stuff. But it reminded me of another idea I had (based on an idea granted to me by a fellow named kludo I met in an artist's stream), also set in a cyberpunk world. And I began to toss around the idea of a set of stories set in the same city, and came up with a few ideas, and NeckRomancer suggested a couple more, and finally, I realized I was enjoying the process more than I had writing in a while, and what's more, I had 5 stories that I thought fit together pretty well, I knew exactly where they began and ended and how they fit together. They could be short, I told myself, maybe one sex scene each, so it wouldn't be too much of a distraction from my other projects. And I started writing the first, getting more work done in one day than I had in all the other stories I was working on combined in the past week, and I had that glorious feeling I hadn't had in a long time where my mind was racing with things to write even while I was asleep.

So I figured I had to stick with it, even if it meant everything else getting delayed, again, for overall output, the best strategy is sticking with the stuff I'm excited with most.
I finished the first story, and am started on the second. I'm not going to officially post it to my site (http://www.asstr.org/~AnonyMPC/ if you've forgotten), or my HF page, until all five are done and cross-checked. But, because I have a history with this site, I thought I'd post them one-by-one here and here only. You can, hopefully, be my beta-test, so I can catch any major issues. This also means it'll be slightly less edited than they usually are, and I plan to tighten it up.

A few notes of things I'm especially looking for, or need to say up front:
Classic cyberpunk, which I'm a fan of, doesn't really mesh perfectly with computers and the Internet as it exists today. So I've done a bit of a bastard fusion and used some handwaving of vague historical events that have altered how things work. I'm certainly willing to hear if you think anything doesn't make sense on that level (networks don&# Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Anonymous 20/03/11(Wed)09:16 No. 26667

A quick note to anyone returning to this thread after a while, especially MPC fans: before you jump into the new parts, you should go to his asstr site and reread- or at least skim- the first three stories there. Also maybe stay on that site to read the last two. The formatting here can only provide you with so much.

OK, so, to begin: Fuck Attachments is awesome. I think it represents peak MPC. A wishy-washy male protagonist who wants to do the right thing being forced to fuck his little sister at gunpoint by ANOTHER little sister strikes me as a high-pressure twist on your best plots of the past. You've done it so it's not only convincing, but also really hot. The ability he unlocks (cybernetic here, but supernatural in a way that calls back to your earlier sci-fi/fantasy stuff) to feel all his sisters' sensations compounded with his own is, again, hot, but also fits really well with your constant, universal themes of empathy and fair gratification. The intrigue of the family dynamics and their business interests matches your older serials for intensity, but Jesus Christ does the next story blow that out of that water.

I should say to everyone else here that these next spoiler tags are more important than those above, and I really, really think you should read the whole story before/instead of checking under them.

When I started Corp's Party, I was prepared to feel the same sort of "ok, ok, nice" that I'd felt about Alt. Sentence. I was gonna leave a note about how Attachments was cool, say I was glad you were back, give you a high five, all that. It took me a day or two to get past the beginning, both because it was a slow sort of exposition and because reading pretty much anything's become difficult for me over the past several years (damn attention span's shrinking every day). HOWEVER. When it got interesting, it got interesting. And more interesting. And when Ventura said "the [eye] I got you at least matched," I truly lost my shit. Like, I'd just gone back and reread most of the first three stories, and I respected them for what they were, but the tie-ins had really not sunk in, aside from a couple things I couldn't figure out: PoV getting the arm that then got sent to Mitsy, details in the frame narration, etc. That sentence kicked it up to a whole new level. I knew she would be back, but I didn't know she would be back in a way that would have me go "OH SHIT" to the degree that it did and continued to do for the rest of the scene. In the paragraphs that followed, the realization that she was about to kill the Morgans clicked with the Plague Or Vehicular homicide acronym from the end of Attachments, and THAT triggered a realization that the acrony Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Anonymous 20/04/14(Tue)08:28 No. 26692

i like the level of detail in your stories. not graphic sexual detail (thought that's usually pretty good too) but like in your gravity falls story, besides matching a disney channel show almost exactly for tone, you invent the whole secret disney sex fantasy channel + park to fit it into. in this story, the same way, you've got a good deviant little girl fantasy, but it's part of a whole cool kinda world you've made up, which you've put real effort and thought into. that's pretty cool to me.


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One of your biggest fans since 2010 Anonymous 20/11/17(Tue)08:34 No. 27048

Hey AnonyMPC... i've been reading your histories since 2010 and I was wondering what happened with you? Are you OK? I know u took some hiatus every now and then but I just want to know if u are doing fine. Your stories are great and I enjoy them so much. Thank you for sharing them for free too, it means a lot to your fans.





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