Sometimes, particularly when you're writing a longer story, you might end up writing something that doesn't really fit with the flow of things, or it doesn't sit right with the characters normal behaviour, or there's just some other nagging problem that means you have to go back and do a rewrite of the problem section.

Now rewrites suck, but if you're very lucky you'll catch the problem when you're only a couple of paragraphs in, and so the rewrite isn't really a terrible pain in the ass.

On the other hand, the outtake below is an example of what happens when a problem section isn't caught quickly enough, in this case because it was way too much fun to write it.


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"Dad. I want you to be my first."

"You're... not kidding... are you?"

"I want you Dad, I want you to make a woman of me. I want you to make love with me, right here, in my bed. I want to feel safe, and warm, and protected, and Loved, and cared for in your arms Dad, and I want to feel you inside me."

"This is serious Amy, Do you understand what could happen if we did this? It could destroy our family. Your Mom would probably hate you and she'd certainly never ever forgive me."

"I know Dad, but I want you to have my virginity, I want to feel like a woman as you make love to me, I want to feel the warmth of your sperm deep inside me as you cum in me Dad, I need you."

Amy threw her bedcovers back exposing her nudity to her Dad, her legs apart, with her pussy lips flushed and parted, visible through the fine brown hair between her legs. He looked at her, not as a father looking at his young nude daughter, but as a man, looking at a young and beautiful and very sexy naked woman who was very clearly highly aroused.

"Are you absolutely sure you want this Amy?"

"Dad, I want you to make Love to me, I want you to fuck me, and pound me, and use me, and I especially want you to cum in me, deep in my virgin pussy. And when we've shared that intimacy, I'll want to share some other intimate things with you too."

Dad got undressed and stood naked before Amy, his erection firm and hard, pointing straight at her. He climbed onto her bed and pulled the covers back over them. He kissed his baby girl, and felt the passion as she kissed him back, urgently.

"Fuck me Dad, I'm so wet, make me a woman."

He wrapped his hand around his erection, and pressed the tip to his little girls vaginal opening, he could feel her soft downy pubic hair caressing his tip. They looked into each others eyes, "Ready, honey?"

Amy nodded, and he slowly fed his erection inch by inch into her virgin pussy.

"Ohhh, Daddy...." she moaned as his tip eventually brushed against her cervix, "Ohh, I feel you Daddy, you're so deep inside me, you feel so good, so hard inside me, I Love you."

"I Love you too princess", he replied as he fought to keep control of his balls to prevent them from immediately spewing their precious contents into his baby girl.

He started to move, to withdraw from her, she groaned and mourned the emptiness she felt inside her, and then happily cooed and celebrated when her fathers cock slowly pushed back into her.

"How are you doing princess, does it hurt?"

"No Dad, it feels wonderful, it feels delicious, I feel so full with you in me, almost stuffed, it feels so warm, but it doesn't hurt."

Hearing Amy's happiness Dad began to thrust in and out of her pussy, she was utterly soaked in her own juices, she rocked her hips slightly allowing him even more access to her pussy and she wrapped her arms and legs around her Dad's back.

"Faster Daddy. I need you to fuck me harder, you won't break me."

"He sped up some more, he kept rocking and swiveling his hips, making his cock brush all over her insides, each motion sending new spikes of pleasure into her brain.

"Daddy, I'm getting closer, keep fucking me, pound me into the bed, I can take it, just fuck me."

"Ohh, Princess, I'm nearly there, I have to pull out..."

"Nooo, Daddy, I want you to cum in me, I need to feel your warmth fill me, please stay in me."

Dad knew he couldn't pull out, didn't want to pull out, he pushed forward one last time, felt her cervix press on the tip of him again and then the pressure went away, he heard her groan a deep primal groan of satisfaction and pleasure and he knew what had happened, he was balls deep in his pretty little baby girl and the tip of his cock was poking straight into her womb and he was already starting to spurt.

They lay there, very much joined at the groin, he could feel her pussy flutter and massage his cock, he knew she'd come when she'd felt him flooding her womb with his sperm, she was still wrapped around him, unwilling or unable to let go at that moment.

"Daddy?"

"Yes, princess?"

"If you pull out and I lay on my front, would you make love to my bottom please?"

"You want me to...?"

"I want you to fuck me daddy, I want you to put your penis in my bottom until it won't go in any further, and then I want you to fuck me please."

He slowly pulled out from her pussy, he had expected to see at least some of his cum drip from her, but then remembered he'd planted his seed directly in her womb, and her cervix and the fact she was laying down kept his seed firmly inside her.

She rolled over, presenting her cute little bottom to him, "Do it Daddy, I want you to have my bottom, I want you to fuck me like you mean it."

He couldn't resist her, and he knew it, he parted her buttcheeks, and looked at her pretty pink anus, he pressed his tip to the orifice and used his hips to increase the pressure.

Slowly the tip of his cock slipped inside her, she really was deliciously tight, so he moved as slowly as he possibly could. He knew we wasn't gonna just slide his whole length in her in one go, so he began to steadily rock back and forth, letting her get used to having something penetrate her rear end.

After quite some time he realised he'd finally bottomed out, that he was all the way inside her, he stayed still deep inside her for a minute or so, letting her body slowly relax around his cock, then he began to fuck her.

She hissed at him like some wild feral cat as he pushed his cock back in her, and moaned as it was pulled almost all the way out, he started to speed up, the hisses and moans gradually started to blend together into a symphony of nonsensical noises that still managed to sound so completely and utterly sexual to his ears.

"Pound me Daddy, fuck my bum, make me yours."

He obliged her requests, and long-stroked his cock in and out of her butt, savouring the delicious warmth of her internal body heat on his cock, then he pulled in close to her, almost laying on top of her, and rabbit-fucked her ass as fast as his hips would allow, and she mewled and purred and moaned in ways that only enflamed him even more.

"Honey, I'm gonna cum, I'm gonna cum in your bottom, okay?"

"Do it Daddy, fuck me, give me all of your cum, I want to feel it painting my insides again, you make me feel so good Daddy."

"This is it princess, here it comes... oh god, honey...I'm cumming in your pretty little bottom."

"Oh don't stop Daddy, keep spurting in me, I want all of it in me."

Eventually they both relaxed, "Daddy, there's something else I want you to do for me."

"Name it princess."

"I want you to fuck my mouth, I want you to feed your penis into my mouth slowly so I can clean it with my tongue for you, and then I want to try and take you into my throat."

"Ohh, princess. I Love you honey, so much. Let me lay down, you can be on top for this."

They shifted positions, Amy sat on her fathers chest and leaned forward, his cock still hard and looking for attention. She kissed the tip and his cock jumped, she sucked the tip into her mouth, and played with it with her tongue, tasting her pussy, and her butt, and himself all combined for the first time, she was thrilled and lowered her head to take more of him into her mouth. Her head started bobbing up and down, as she blew her Dads cock.

She loved how it felt in her mouth, against her tongue, little by little she sucked more of him into her, her head rising and falling further the more of him she took into her. Eventually she reached a point where the only way forward was into her throat, she adjusted her position ever so slightly, and timed her head bobbing against her breathing and as she drew in a breath her head lowered onto him and the head of his cock almost flowed into her throat, gently scraping along the back of it.

As soon as Dad realised what had just happened his balls immediately tightened in reaction, and his cock jerked but couldn't really go anywhere with the tip firmly trapped in her throat, he tried to warn her, but the words wouldn't make themselves heard, and he felt his sperm flow through him and into his baby girls throat, and he realised she was swallowing it all, and she wasn't panicing, and she wasn't struggling.

Eventually he stopped spurting, his balls literally felt empty, but he knew if she asked him too that somehow he could manage to go again. They fell beside each other, panting, covered in sweat.

"Daddy, You've made me the happiest woman in the world, but there's just one more thing."

"Name it honey."

"I'm yours Daddy. When it comes to sex, I'll do anything and everything you ask of me okay? You own me forever. I'll be your personal living breathing sex doll. I'll be your dirty slutty little baby girl Daddy, and I'll do whatever you want, whenever you want, with whoever you want."