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Roommates (loli) Anonymous 12/10/06(Sat)11:32 No. 17319

It all started when I was 19, in my first semester at college. I'd moved away from home and into my first apartment, and got my first roommate as well. He was a year younger than me, but unlike me he hadn't spent a year after graduating highschool saving up his money for tuition and rent. His parents died in an avalanche at a ski resort, and between their considerable savings and the payout from the life insurance, he could afford college and not have to work for years. I hadn't known it when I met him at orientation and we decided to share an apartment, but he also had custody of his 11 year old sister.

The apartment was big, and nicer than I could have ever afforded on my own, so all three of us had separate bedrooms (hers was supposed to be a laundry room or something originally.). I also discovered my roommate was a bit of a dick who neglected his little sister.

I don't think it was intentional, more a result of losing his parents and having to adjust his plans for the future to revolve around caring for his sibling, and he probably wasn't ready for that sort of responsibility. But unless he needed to give her a ride or buy her something she needed, he basically didn't interact with her. He also barely did anything with me; maybe once a week he'd play video games with me, but he spent nearly all his time in class or shut in his room studying.

His little sister was cute, with her blue eyes, freckles, and short, light brown hair, but obviously way too young for me. She didn't play with dolls or anything, so I guess she was mature for her age, but she also spent all her time shut in her room when she wasn't at school. And I don't think she had any friends at her new school either.

After a month or so with my new roommates, we'd settled into a routine. If they weren't exactly friendly, they weren't bad either; quiet, clean, and they were the only way I could afford a really nice apartment just a block from campus.

I wish I'd known then what I know now. It'd have saved me a lot of grief.


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Wan Shi Tong!!H2L2Z0LGV5 16/02/06(Sat)12:17 No. 24097

>>24094
Thank you Bkil, I will try to be more thorough next time.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/02/17(Wed)11:03 No. 24115

>>24084


Huzzah.


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Anonymous 16/02/19(Fri)06:33 No. 24118

Alive? Op :)


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Anonymous 16/02/24(Wed)09:43 No. 24129

>>17319
We are all still here, OP <3


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OP Kryten 16/02/24(Wed)12:52 No. 24130

Praise Jesus !


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Anonymous 16/02/26(Fri)02:13 No. 24133

I'm still here... waiting patiently...


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Anonymous 16/02/26(Fri)05:49 No. 24134

>>24133
I don't understand how you can do that...
The patiently part.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/03/17(Thu)08:07 No. 24151

We lay there like that for what seemed like an hour, but was actually only about ten minutes. She'd gotten her breath back by then, but was still lying on my chest with a dreamy look on her face.

After a while though, I was getting kind of antsy, so I awkwardly craned my neck down so I could give her a gentle kiss on the forehead, brushing her hair off of her sweaty forehead in the process.

"Hey kiddo, think maybe I could get a turn now?"

She giggled and nodded, grinning, and scooted down so she was sitting between my legs. Without asking permission this time, she began stroking my shaft, then took me into her mouth with only a little encouragement on my part.

Oh geez, this felt glorious. I leaned back into the pillow and luxuriated in the moist warmth of her mouth, watching her little head bob up and down on my dick; she never went very deep, but she kept a good rhythm.

After a while, she stopped sucking and complained that her neck was getting sore and switched back to jerking me off. I decided it was as good a time as any for a little bonding.

Shut up. Quit judging me. I already know what you're thinking.

"So kiddo, whatcha learning in class this week?"

"I dunno. Stuff."

"What sorta stuff?"

"Um... stuff."

We both laughed at her response, then I changed tack.

"What's your favorite thing you're learning in school this week?"

She switched hands and brushed her hair out of her face (she really did do that a lot lately; maybe she needed a haircut), then replied, "I guess the book we're reading in class?"

"Which one is that?"

"I don't remember what it's called. Um... Oh, shoot! It's about this boy who runs away from home to live in the woods and he has a pet hawk. It's really cool."

"Oh, I know that one. We read it in class when I was your age. My Side of the Mountain."

"Yeah! That's it."

She switched hands again, watching my dick as she continued to jerk me off, and I kept the conversation going.

"So you like that one, huh? What do you like about it?"

"I dunno. Living in the woods is cool. He did stuff all on his own, like a grown up. Kinda like when we went camping."

That gave me an idea.

"You maybe wanna go camping again? Spring break is coming up soon."

The idea of an entire week with Sara alone was absolutely invigorating. I could feel my erection getting even harder just thinking of the possibilities.

Yes, at this point I was well past the point of no return and had been for quite some time.

"Yeah! That was awesome. I liked how we played indians. And, um, other stuff," she added, blushing slightly as she grinned, still jerking me off.

"What sort of other stuff?" I asked, knowing full well what she meant.

She blushed and fidgeted in the most adorable way.

"You knoooow... boyfriend and girlfriend stuff."

"Oh, THAT stuff. Gotcha."

She paused in her stroking and looked me dead in the eye, all humor gone.

"We are boyfriend and girlfriend, right?"

"Absolutely. I'm your boyfriend, and you're my girlfriend. And what we're doing together is special."

"Really?"

"Really. Just the two of us."

At the moment, I actually believed it myself. She grinned shyly and returned to pumping my dick with her hand and I reached down to muss her hair a little.

"Hey, sweetie? You mind going back to sucking again?"

"Nuh-uh," and her adorable little head went right back to bobbing up and down on my dick.

I really was a lucky son of a bitch, even if I was going straight to hell. Really, I could only think one thing: worth it.

After a few minutes of her blowing me, I started feeling the familiar tension in my balls again and I gently warned her, "ok, I'm about to finish. Remember to keep it all in your mouth so you don't make a mess."

"Mm-hm."

I put one hand on her head, just to make sure she didn't shy away when I came and a few seconds later she froze as I arched my back slightly and wave after wave of semen pumped into her little mouth. I held her still until it finished, then took my hand off her head and she sat up, coughing, a streamer of jizz stretching from her chin to my dick.

"Swallow it, don't make a mess."

She swallowed audibly, then coughed some more.

"You ok?"

She nodded, then coughed again and I handed her the glass of water I kept on my nightstand. A couple swigs later and she was ok.

"Mind cleaning me off, sweetie?"

I held my increasingly floppy dick erect in one hand and she nodded, taking me into her mouth again and cleaning the last little bits of jizz off with a slurp.

"That's a good girl. Do you like doing that?"

She nodded and wiped her mouth with the back of her hand, then laid down and I put an arm around her as she cuddled up next to me.

"Uh-huh. It was kinda weird at first, but... I dunno, I just kinda like it."

"Cause it's boyfriend-girlfriend stuff?"

"Yeah. And... I like to make you feel good."

"I like to make you feel good too."

I glanced at the clock; plenty of time.

"So you really want to go camping, huh?"

"Yeah! I really had fun last time. We can play indians again, and maybe we can find a hawk like in the book and bring it home!"

"Pretty sure that's illegal now, kiddo."

Not that I was letting a little thing like "legal" stop me from doing other things, of course.

She just shrugged, slowly kicking her feet back and forth in the air, and I slowly slid my fingers down her back, explored the curve of her butt, and back again. She really was beautiful, like a little porcelain doll. Except, not creepy like the ones you usually see. Everyone has that one aunt who has a guest room full of creepy fucking dolls that stare at you while you sleep in the guest bed as a kid. She was nothing like that. Obviously.

"Well, if your brother says it's ok, why don't we go camping for spring week? We can stay up there for a whole week, just the two of us, and we can do whatever we want."

"That'd be awesome!"

"In the meantime though, we're all sweaty and gross. Let's hop in the shower."

She needed no encouragement, jumping out of the bed, grabbing her clothes off the floor and tossing them in the hamper, and climbing into the tub. I followed at a more sedately pace, turned the water on to start warming up, and listened to Sara chatter about how she wanted to make a spear, a real one, and hunt a buffalo while we were camping, then checked the temperature of the water and got into the tub myself.

Again, for those of you who have only showered alone, showering with another person is kind of awkward, even when they're shorter and skinnier than you. I detached the shower head, stretched out the hose, and just held it by hand so we could both be getting at least a little water at the same time.

I shampooed first, and Sara helped me wash my back and especially my genitals, grinning and blushing the entire time. Then I soaped her down, paying extra attention to her nipples and privates, and we both rinsed off.

Peeking out from behind the shower curtain at the clock on the wall, I saw we still had plenty of time, so I detached the shower head again and stretched it as far as it would go and sat down at the end of the tub.

"Here kiddo, sit down."

She did, wiggling her butt against my crotch and leaning back against my chest, and I slid one hand between her legs, which she obligingly spread for me.

"Are you gonna make me feel good again?"

"Sure am."

This time I combined my usual stroking with the shower head, keeping it aimed at her crotch. After a little while, she melted against me, blushing and closing her eyes as she murmured, "that feels good. Keep doing that."

I did, and after about ten minutes she'd drawn her legs up to her chest (still spread apart so I had access to her naughty bits), had my free hand in a death grip, and was biting her lip while panting heavily.

Her pants soon turned into high-pitched little gasps, she curled her toes into fists again (why did that remind me of Die Hard all of a sudden?), and she tensed up.

I think that time she really did pee herself, but she didn't seem to notice. She relaxed again and lay against me, limp and boneless, gasping for breath.

"Was it good?"

"Uh... huh..."

I mentally chalked the number of times I'd made an eleven year old girl orgasm to two and shifted the shower head so it was getting both of us instead of just her crotch.

Once she caught her breath, I helped her back to her feet (she seemed a little dizzy still) and I thoroughly rinsed us both down again. Then she noticed that I was once again at full mast and, with a little prompting, got on her knees and began stroking my dick.

"Mind sucking, sweetie? It feels better that way."

She obliged, but stopped after a while and grimaced, holding one hand to her neck.

"My neck is sore."

Well, I guess not being used to giving blowjobs on a regular basis can give you a kink in your neck.

"Let's try something. Open your mouth?"

She did, and I inserted my penis, then gently held her by the head with both hands and slowly started thrusting in and out of her mouth. She alternated between looking up at me and staring at my dick as it went in and out, but just knelt there without protest, so I decided I was good and began thrusting a little faster.

After a little bit of that, I figured I might as well push the envelope, so I slowed my thrusting and instead went a little deeper, trying to see how much of my penis would fit into her mouth without gagging her. I went just a little bit deeper and she grimaced and jerked slightly, so I went a little shallower with my thrusts and she settled down again. I was definitely going deeper than she had on her own though.

Having found a depth we were both comfortable with, I began thrusting faster and she closed her eyes, resting her hands on my thighs.

Let me tell you, getting a blowjob feels amazing, but the urge to thrust is primal and deep, and fulfilling that urge is amazingly satisfying. I took in deep breaths of air, listening to the rhythm of the shower and watched her cute face as I fucked it, and the whole scene just overwhelmed my senses and I blew my load into her mouth again, shuddering in the sweet ecstasy of release.

I pulled out of her mouth and she make an "ack-ptht!" noise as she spat a huge gob of saliva and semen into the tub to be washed down the drain.

"You should always swallow it," I said, trying not to sound bossy.

"How come? We're in the shower, it can't make a mess here."

"It's... healthy for you."

"Really?"

"Yep. Girls are supposed to swallow it. It's good for them."

At this point, I was already doing a cannonball dive into the lake of fire, so why not?

"Oh. Ok."

She polished my rapidly shrinking penis with my beautiful lips, making sure she didn't miss any of my semen, then I helped her to her feet and rinsed us both off again.

There was only one towel in the bathroom, so I let her have it and dripped my way across the hall into my bedroom, grabbed a towel and quickly dried off, then got dressed. Bill could come home any minute now and I didn't want him getting suspicious if we both had wet hair from the shower, so I slipped on a ball cap I rarely wore and walked into the kitchen to start making some dinner.

I heard the key in the door and Bill walked in just as I had selected chili mac for dinner.

"Hey Bill, what's up?"

"Not much, just more assignments. You thinking of taking Non-Western Civ with Dr. Gerard next semester?"

"Yeah, why?"

"I am too. Wanna sign up for the same class? Might be fun doing it together."

"Sure," I said, making a mental note to sign up for the class at a different time so we weren't in class together and I could maximize my time alone with his little sister.

Just then, Sara walked in, naked as a jaybird, scrubbing her hair with the towel and said, "Hey! He's gonna go camping again for spring break! Can I go too? Pleeeeeease?"

Bill glanced at her while I tried not to have a heart attack; ok, walking to and from the shower naked was one thing, but just standing there on full display like it was nothing? He was going to think something was weird about that. He was going to freak and demand she cover herself up, or tell me not to look or something.

Nope. He just acted like his little sister wasn't standing in front of both of us stark naked and replied, "I don't know if he wants to take you along, Sara. Grown ups make their own plans."

Since he wasn't reacting, I tried to play it cool, though I'm sure I was blushing myself and probably looked sketchy as hell.

"No, I don't mind. She had fun last time, and it'd be kinda boring being by myself the whole week."

"Pleeeeeeeeease?" Sara begged while bouncing up and down, still naked and not making any effort to preserve her modesty. "It was soooo much fun last time, and I promise I won't bother him the whole time we're there!"

Bill looked at me and shrugged.

"If it's cool with you, it's cool with me. I wouldn't mind having the place to myself for a few days."

"Nah, it's cool. We'll need to take more stuff since we'll be out there longer, but I don't mind if she tags along."

As if it weren't my idea in the first place.

Bill shrugged again and said, "Ok, looks like you're going camping."

"YEEEESSSSSSS! Thanks Bill, you're awesome!"

"I try to be, anyway."

Sara threw the towel on the floor and hugged her brother, then hugged me, grabbed the towel again, and scampered off to her room.

Once she was safely out of earshot, Bill turned to me and said, "thanks man, I appreciate what you're doing for her. This is the most normal she's been since, well... since mom and dad died."

He slipped me a fifty and I mumbled something about how it was no bother and felt like a piece of shit the entire time I was cooking dinner.

I felt better after Sara stomped back into the living room like a herd of elephants, clad only in t-shirt and panties, and plopped herself down at the dinner table to dig into a bowl of chili mac. The prospect of an entire week alone with her, away from civilization and all it's rules, was nearly euphoric.

How the hell was I able to get away with so much?


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/03/17(Thu)08:37 No. 24152

>>24084

Other than the one post that was pointed out, looks good.

It's not visible on the main site though, and doesn't come up in searches. Think you can fix that, since I generously donated a fresh, new chapter? I think that's more than fair.

*tongue-in-cheek*


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Anonymous 16/03/20(Sun)01:54 No. 24153

Is this really what I think it is?


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/03/20(Sun)02:27 No. 24154

>>24153

A sexy new chapter? Yes. Yes it is.


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Bkil 16/03/21(Mon)02:49 No. 24155

Thanks for the new chapter OP!

I'm looking forward to reading the new chapter. I'm about halfway through rereading the story so I can remember where we were in the action ;)


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/03/28(Mon)10:41 No. 24162

I decided that if I was going to be taking Sara camping for a week, I might as well get her psyched up for it.

I found a copy of Hatchet at a mom-and-pop used book store for a dollar and bought it for her; she devoured it in less than a day, lying on her stomach on the couch reading, legs kicking back and forth in the air, while Bill and I did our respective assignments and cooked dinner. She was still reading when she went to bed, and at breakfast the next day she announced that she'd finished it.

If she liked the primitive survival of My Side of the Mountain and Hatchet, then maybe she'd like a similar movie. Last time I took her camping, we ran around naked pretending to be indians; I didn't know of any good movies about indians like that, but I knew of a couple caveman movies.

So I pirated Clan of the Cave Bear and Quest for Fire on my laptop for us to watch; by the time I got home from class, they had both finished downloading and I stripped down to my boxers and did another light workout in anticipation of Sara's arrival from school.

She dumped her backpack, went into her room for a minute, then appeared in my doorway perfectly naked and grinning mischievously. I hauled down my boxers while giving a grin of my own and she came into my room and got on her knees in front of me.

Taking my penis into her hand, she began stroking, getting me hard, while she curiously fondled my balls. It didn't take long for my erection to achieve full size and it took very little encouragement for her to switch from jerking me off to sucking me off, though it did take some work getting her to go deeper this time; I'd already established just a couple days before that she could take me into her mouth deeper than she had been on her own, so it took only a little encouraging to her to do it herself.

I gently stroked her hair and allowed myself a moan of pleasure as she worked my shaft with her warm little mouth. I'm sure a grown woman, or at least a college girl, could have taken my whole penis into her mouth and sucked me off with more skill, but I didn't care anymore. I had what I wanted right there.

Unfortunately, all good things must come to an end, and after only a few minutes Sara spat my dick out (now there's an image) and complained that her neck was sore again. I wasn't going to push her though, so we transitioned back to the handjob and I told her what a good job she was doing.

"So do girls really swallow every time?"

"Well, most do. Most girls like it."

"Huh. It doesn't taste bad, after you get used to it..."

"It's also good for you if you swallow it," I said, really just encouraging her to swallow my semen no matter what. I really had seen studies that semen was healthy for you though.

"Really?"

"Really. They're sort of like... girl vitamins," I said lamely.

"Girl vitamins?" she asked skeptically, switching hands as she jerked me off.

"Yeah. It's good for you, lots of protein, and most girls swallow it, so... it's kinda like vitamins for girls."

She cocked her head adorably while staring at my penis in though, then giggled.

"Girl vitamins. I like it. That's silly."

"You're silly."

"Yup."

"Ready for your dose of vitamins?" I said, sounding cocky and trying to keep a straight face.

She made no such effort and giggled again, then nodded.

"Say aaah!"

She opened her mouth and stuck out her tongue and I reached down, moved her hand out of the way, and jerked myself off faster than she had been. The sight of her beautiful face, waiting for my semen, was too much and it didn't take long before I erupted in ecstasy, shooting my load.

Most of it went into her mouth, the rest ended up on her lips and chin. She swallowed noisily, then wiped her mouth with her hand and licked that clean. It took only a little prompting for her to suck my penis clean, and then she stood up and I gave her a big hug.

"That's my girl! You took it like a champ, didn't you?"

"Yeah. It's really not bad."

"Hey, you wanna watch a movie?"

"Sure!"

We climbed into bed , spooning up against each other, and I set my laptop on my lap and started up Clan of the Cave Bear. Throughout the movie I gently massaged her puffy little nipples and her privates, but she didn't seem especially into it; the movie had her enraptured.

The fact that it had sex in it didn't hurt my agenda any. Quest for Fire had more overt nudity and sex in it, but it would have to wait for another day.

By the time the movie finished, Bill could be heard coming into the apartment and Sara leaped off the bed and shut the door to my room, blushing an amazing shade of red. I hurriedly got dressed, but Sara had left all her clothes in her room and was trapped in my room, naked.

We waited there until we heard him rummaging through the kitchen cabinets and I shooed her out the door and into her room, where she shut the door behind her and presumably got dressed.

I casually sauntered out of my room, said, "Hey Bill,", got a grunt in reply, and poured myself a glass of orange juice. Sara came out a minute later, clothed but barefoot, and still blushing somewhat, and sat at the table to start her homework.

Bill took no notice and shut himself in his room. We both breathed a sigh of relief, then grinned at each other. It hadn't really been a close call, but it still sort of counted.

By this point, I had well and truly gone down the slippery slope and was full steam ahead. There was no going back.


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Anonymous 16/03/31(Thu)05:46 No. 24166

An update, an update! Regularly but unscheduled! Still great! More we request humbly!


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Anonymous 16/04/02(Sat)06:17 No. 24170

Bump for a great story


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Anonymous 16/04/02(Sat)18:05 No. 24171

>>24162
I check back once a few months. Glad you haven't given up on the readers. Keep it up.


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Anonymous 16/04/03(Sun)10:12 No. 24172

I would take a bullet for you, OP. this is beautiful. I'm just waiting for the dude to take the next step into hell.


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Wan Shi Tong!!H2L2Z0LGV5 16/04/07(Thu)07:04 No. 24181

>>24152
The story has been updated. I am still working on the searching. Right now, it is visible by going to the authors page, and looking through the list for Damocles.


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Bkil 16/04/07(Thu)09:59 No. 24183

>>24181
Thanks for doing the work to archive this story.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/04/16(Sat)10:28 No. 24200

The drive out to the country was long and uneventful; Sara chattered about how dumb and annoying her classmates were and how none of them were nice to her, how cool the caveman movies we'd watched were, how she wanted to make a spear to hunt with, why guys who liked My Little Pony were dumb (I have no idea who she had in mind since boys her age wouldn't be caught dead watching a girl's cartoon and neither Bill or I had ever seen it), and how she needed a 3DS to replace her old DS Lite so she could play the new Pokemon games on it.

This time I'd come better prepared, with enough food and drinks for the entire week, raingear, toilet paper, towels, and other necessities we'd lacked last time. Again, neither of us had brought swim suits, this time deliberately.

Once we got off the pavement onto the gravel road, I decided to be the cool guy again.

"You wanna drive?"

"What? Seriously?!"

"Yeah. Swap seats."

She literally squeed as she got in the driver's seat and I had to make her slow down and listen to instruction as I helped her adjust the seat and steering wheel, taught her how to use the pedals, etc. She got off to a jerky start and I had to fuss at her not to ride the brake with one foot and the gas with the other, but she eventually got the idea and we made our way at a sedate 2 mph until we got to a spot where the road was washed out by recent rain storms and I took over driving again.

We made it to the gate for our property, which I had a hard time unlocking for some reason (maybe the lock was rusty?), then we drove through, locked the gate behind us, and parked the car in a field, which I noticed my dad had apparently mowed the last time he'd been up there.

I recruited Sara in pitching the tent instead of letting her run off and explore on her own, then we unpacked our things, set up a camp fire for later, and surveyed our work.

"Good job, kiddo. Now we can have fun!"

"Whatcha wanna do first?"

"I dunno, what do you wanna do first?"

"Ummmm... last time we played indians, so... you wanna play cavemen?"

Exactly as I predicted.

"Sure!"

We both stripped down to just our socks and shoes, tossed our clothes in the tent, and then went running through the woods, grunting, hooting, and beating our chests. We found some long sticks and Sara insisted on making proper spears, so I spent twenty minutes or so with a knife making the ends vaguely pointy without making them dangerously sharp, then we resumed whooping, grunting, and hollering our way through the woods and probably scaring off all the wildlife in a five mile radius. At one point we stopped to throw a bunch of rocks at an invisible sabertooth tiger until it ran away, then we found a vague depression in the ground which Sara immediately declared was an "enemy cave".

"We should attack and steal their fire!"

"But we already have a fire," I pointed out stupidly.

She thought for a moment, then thumped her chest with her fist and waved her spear in a threatening manner.

"Then we should steal their women!"

Now, I want to stop and describe the scene here:

Imagine an adorable 11 year old girl, barely on the cusp of adolescence, naked as a jay bird except for her Reeboks, holding a spear, thumping her chest like Tarzan, and declaring that we should attack a tribe of cavemen and steal their women.

Now do you see why I love her so much?

I immediately agreed that this was a worthy goal, so we charged the 'cave', shouted war cries, stabbed imaginary cavemen with our spears, then clubbed two women apiece, threw them over our shoulders, and ran off back to our 'cave' (the tent) with them and high-fived in victory.

Then Sara seemed to have a fridge moment (you know, that sudden 'wait a minute' thought you have when you get up to go to the fridge during a commercial break and you ponder something about the show or movie you're watching) and asked, "how come cave men steal each other's women?"

Deciding honesty was the best policy, I shrugged and answered, "so they can have sex with them."

"Oh." She paused a moment, then asked, "so how does that work?"

"Well, you saw how they did it in the movies, right?"

She hesitated a moment, then got down on all fours in front of the tent, presenting her hindquarters to me, and looked over her shoulder at me.

"Like this, right?"

"Well, it doesn't have to be like that, but yeah."

She stood up again, then placed her hands on her hips.

"Ok. Then you're a cave man and you just captured me! Now what?"

I grinned and unzipped the tent and ushered her inside; we both shed our shoes and socks as we went in.

"Assume the position, wench!"

I'm pretty sure cavemen said something like that at some point.

She got down on all fours and wiggled her butt at me, and I got down on my knees as my dick immediately became hard enough to penetrate diamond. I gently rubbed between her legs with my fingers and felt the sheer NEED of this moment.

Then she looked over her shoulder again, vague anxiety clear on her face, and asked, "are we gonna have sex for real?"

"Um, no sweety. I don't think you're ready for that yet. We're just gonna pretend."

"Ok," she said, her relief evident.

I continued with the petting until she began to turn pink and moisten up, then I began rubbing the head of my penis up and down her slit. She tensed up and I patted her on the behind and reassured her that we were still just pretending.

"When people have sex, the boy puts his penis in the girl's vagina, right?"

"Sure does."

"And girls are supposed to get wet down there so the boy goes inside easier?"

"Yup."

"But we're not gonna do that now?"

"No, I don't think you're ready, kiddo. We're just gonna pretend we're having sex."

She nodded and stared at the floor of the tent, obviously still a little nervous. I decided to just keep going and let her get used to it, and continued to rub the head of my penis up and down her slit for another minute or so.

"Put your legs together."

She complied, and I slid my penis between her thighs so it was rubbing against her labia and gently grasped her by the waist.

"Ok, I'm gonna pretend we're having sex now. But when I finish, you need to hurry and swallow it all so we don't make a mess in the tent, ok?"

"Ok."

Then I began slowly and gently thrusting in and out between her thighs, the warmth from her crotch adding to the feeling. It was weird... not as warm and definitely not as moist as her mouth, but it certainly fulfilled the primal urge to thrust, and looking down at her in the doggystyle position was absolutely invigorating.

I began to thrust harder, breathing fast, and she rocked forward and back with my thrusts; I had to get her to adjust her thighs several times as she tried to compensate for being jolted back and forth, but I got a good rhythm going and it certainly good.

After a few minutes, I felt myself nearing the end, so I pulled out from between her legs and made her turn around, then I put my dick in her mouth and resumed thrusting, both hands on her head. I admit, maybe I went a little faster and deeper than she was comfortable with, but she took it like a champ and before long I blew my load into her sweet little mouth; it'd been days since she'd last given me release and I'd stopped jerking off ever since we began doing sexual things on a regular basis, so it was a pretty big load too.

I panted, both hands still holding her face to my crotch so she couldn't take my dick out of her mouth, with her on all fours, and waited for my heart to slow down. I could feel the pull on my penis as she swallowed my cum, then she sucked on the head and probed with her tongue to make sure she'd gotten it all.

I pulled out once I'd caught my breath and flopped onto my back on the floor of the tent and she wiped her mouth with the back of her hand before cuddling up next to me.

"Wow. That was great, kiddo."

"Really?"

"Yeah. What did you think?"

She shrugged, but gave no further response.

"Well, you'll like it more when we do it for real. But for now I don't think you're quite ready yet."

Honestly, I had no idea when it was safe for girls to start having sex, and I honestly didn't know if I could even fit inside of her yet. But I had long since decided that she was going to be my first, and I hers. I WOULD have sex with this beautiful little girl. Eventually. When she was old enough.

"I'm hungry. Can we have dinner now?"

Subject changed, I sat up and announced that the hunters had killed a mammoth and we were having mammoth stew for lunch. We both put our shoes back on and emerged naked into the sunlight, set up our folding chairs, and I got the fire started so we could cook up a big can of beef stew. Once it was on the fire, Sara came to sit on my lap and began a very serious discussion about how we should capture a cave bear and teach it to to guard our cave.

Day one of spring break was barely even halfway over, and we had an entire week all to ourselves.

If I was on the highway to hell, I was going full speed ahead and never looking back.


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Anonymous 16/04/17(Sun)06:34 No. 24202

>>24200
no way, op i had a feeling i should check back here and I actually saw a story the same day you posted it.


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Anonymous 16/04/19(Tue)01:46 No. 24209

>>24200
God bless you OP


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Anonymous 16/04/22(Fri)08:53 No. 24216

>>24200
It's my b-day OP. An update would be the best gift ever. Also this shit is golden, I've been following it for years now


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Anonymous 16/04/23(Sat)08:51 No. 24217

>>24200
:) Hell. Fuckin. YES! NEED MOAR! Nice work, OP!!!


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Kryters 16/04/24(Sun)18:37 No. 24222

We demand more ! MOAR dammit.... ( please ).


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Anonymous 16/04/26(Tue)10:27 No. 24225

Goddammit OP, I'm a woman and I say she's old enough


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Anonymous 16/04/29(Fri)01:01 No. 24232

Op you are my hero!


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Anonymous 16/05/05(Thu)22:30 No. 24246

moar


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. 16/05/06(Fri)17:15 No. 24252

moar, or i will cut myself i swear !


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Anonymous 16/05/07(Sat)18:16 No. 24253

>>24252

Chill.


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. 16/05/12(Thu)14:32 No. 24257

Is posting links allowed ?

If you like 'Roommates' . . .
http://www.asstr.org/~Renpet/stories.html


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Anonymous 16/05/17(Tue)12:42 No. 24269

>>24257
Huh. Thanks for the link, but almost all of those stories are about incest. That's not exactly everyone's cup of tea, even as far as loli lovers go.

Polite sage.


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Anonymous 16/05/18(Wed)17:47 No. 24273

OP please just give the people what they want.


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24257 . 16/05/20(Fri)17:10 No. 24284

>>24269
FapAdvice : His earlier works are the best; i recommend starting at or near the bottom of 'consensual' section.


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Anonymous 16/05/23(Mon)17:52 No. 24287

>>24284
>pretty much everything in the 'consensual' tab is incest
>oldest story is about how "Abby discovers how attractive her father really is and, with the help of her mother, sets about a seduction"

I can't fap to this, bruh


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Anonymous 16/06/15(Wed)05:46 No. 24353

We can lot let this die!


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/06/21(Tue)08:33 No. 24373

>>24353

I started this is 2012. Trust me, it's not dying any time soon.

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After lunch, we resumed running around the woods again, waving sticks, throwing rocks, and, once we got tired, generally just exploring. We found a vine covered in really cool white-and-purple flowers that Sara immediately wanted to weave a crown out of, so I helped her pick some of the vine and then watched her make what was honestly a pretty cool crown out of it, which she plopped on her head as soon as it was finished.

She looked so beautiful, an innocent, naked girl with porcelain white skin, delicate pink, puffy nipples, her gorgeous blue eyes standing out from the sprinkling of freckles across her face, and that crown of flowers (which I had to look up when we got back; they're passion flowers apparently) perfectly contrasting with her light brown hair.

I must've been staring, because she looked at me funny and said, "what?"

"You're so pretty."

She really was. Her beauty made me ache inside just looking at her.

She blushed and brushed her hair out of her face, smiling slightly as she asked, "really?"

"Mmhmm."

Then she looked down and grinned.

"I guess you really think so."

"Well, if anything is going to be honest about how pretty a girl is, it's my penis."

She laughed and, with no encouragement on my part, got down on her knees and began sucking me off.

I rested my hand on her head, careful not to mess up her flower crown, and gently stroked her hair as she drew me in and out of her amazing little mouth, leaned my head back, and closed my eyes.

This, I was convinced, was how man was meant to live. All the artificiality of the modern world was driving us insane as a species, and if people could just get out into nature more, we could get our collective heads straight.

Especially if pretty young girls gave you blowjobs in the process. I don't see how anyone could worry about production quotas, social cliques, or crime if they just communed with nature and naked preteens. I wonder if anyone has ever seriously proposed that as a means of bringing about world peace?

I kept my eyes closed, reveling in the sensations my body was sending me. The softness of her hair under my hand. The cool breeze whispering through the leaves and kissing my skin, raising goosebumps wherever it touched. The moist warmth of her mouth enveloping my head and part of the shaft, the cool puffs of her breath, the rhythmic bobbing of her head... it all combined into a single, perfect moment, one you always remember but can never experience again, not the same. I didn't even try to hold on to it, that would have ruined the experience; I just let it happen, sighing in absolute contentment.

All good things must come to an end, however, and I felt the tightness in my balls that signaled my impending orgasm. I decided not to warn Sara, partly just to see how she reacted and partly so I wouldn't disturb the perfectness of the moment. Normally I would hold onto her head in case she shied away or tried to take me out of her mouth when I came, but this time I just kept gently stroking her hair and let it happen.

My moan of sheer ecstasy would have told her what was happening, but I think what clued her in first was the waves of hot semen pumping into her mouth. She didn't jerk away like I half-expected, she just stopped moving and held my penis in her mouth until it was done ejaculating.

I opened my eyes, actually feeling a little dizzy from the intensity of my orgasm, just as she pulled me out of her mouth with a slurp and an audible swallow.

"Thanks, sweety. That was great."

She grinned and replied, "Gotta get my vitamins!"

We both laughed and resumed our exploration, pausing for her to brush the dirt and leaves off her knees, and a few minutes later we spotted something.

"Whoa, cool! Is that a porcupine?"

"Sure is. Don't get too close."

"I won't."

She squatted down about five or six feet away from the porcupine, which was gnawing on something and seemed to be making a point of ignoring us.

"I didn't know they got so big! I've never seen a real one..."

"I haven't seen one this close before either, actually."

She pointed at the porcupine as it turned to snuffle at us, exclaiming, "hey, it's got blue eyes! I didn't know they had blue eyes!"

"It sure does." I didn't know that either, but I wasn't going to admit it. I had my cool, knowledgeable adult persona to maintain, after all.

The porcupine eventually got annoyed with us being so close and clambered up a tree, stopping about twenty feet up and then staring down at us while chewing on whatever it had.

"That is so cool. I wish I had a camera, I wanna take a picture."

"We'll have to remember to bring one next time."

Eventually, the porcupine just sitting in a tree staring at us got boring and we resumed our exploration, not seeing any other animals thanks to Sara's constant chattering, but finding all kinds of neat plants and rocks.

After another hour or so of that, we slowly made our way back to the tent and settled inside.

"Hungry, kiddo?"

"Mmhmm."

I wasn't too hungry myself, so I only grabbed a single pouch of Mountain House beef stroganof, grabbed two bowls for us, and set water over the fire to boil, stirring up the coals and adding sticks until the fire was going again. Then I relaxed in my chair and honestly enjoyed the feeling of the breeze blowing over my naked body. Maybe nudists really were onto something.

Sara joined me in her chair, having retrieved her DS from the tent, drew her knees up to her chest (which gave me a perfect view of her beautiful little pussy, freckle on the left lip and all) and began playing.

"Do you know how to find Mewtwo?"

"Which one is that?"

"Soulsilver."

"Yeah, it's in Cerulean Cave."

"Oh, that's the place I couldn't get into before. Thanks."

We ate dinner, then retreated into the tent. Sara sat indian-style in one corner, still playing ("I've got ULTRA balls, why won't you just get inside one?!") while I unrolled the sleeping bags. Then, in a moment of cleverness, I decided to zip the bags together into one big sleeping bag and slid inside.

"Make sure the tent is zipped, or critters will crawl in your shoes."

"What kind of critters?"

"Snakes. Scorpions. I've found both in my shoes."

"Yeek!"

"So make sure the tent is zipped."

She double-checked, then paused before getting in the sleeping bag with me, her blush reaching her ears.

"I've never slept with anyone naked before."

"Well, first time for everything. Now we get to cuddle all we want."

She slid in, stopping to remove her socks and toss them in the general direction of her shoes, then became the little spoon to my big spoon.

I gently rubbed my hand up and down her side, giving her butt a squeeze, and she giggled, pressing her back against me before getting lost in her game again. I turned on the lantern and pulled out my book (the adventures of a female space captain who got exiled to the ass end of nowhere because her admiral was a total shit and had to deal with smugglers, pirates, and primitive aliens acquiring muskets from clandestine sources. It was actually pretty good.

After a while, I noticed the clacking of buttons had fallen silent and Sara's breathing had gotten shallow and steady, so I reached over to save her game and turn it off, then stuck a dollar bill in my book as a bookmark (whenever I needed lunch money, I just raided my bookshelf; it was usually good for a couple bucks.), turned off the lantern, and put my arm around the bare, but warm, little angel pressed up against me.

What an amazing day. And I had the entire week ahead of me still.


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Anonymous 16/06/22(Wed)03:38 No. 24375

>>24373
first time poster, wanted to give my thanks


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Anonymous 16/06/22(Wed)14:20 No. 24378

This thread will be 4 years old in October. Think about that.

Frankly, it's not a good thing. Write the story or don't Damacles. Drop the sword or let us go, just be done with it.

By the way you're showing genuine improvement as a writer, this most recent installment is much improved from the last ones. You got more across without retreading over the same information constantly, which is this work's only tangible flaw. I seriously don't want to hear about this prick's reservation in hell again, we get it, you're courting a prepubescent girl. There are other ways of keeping that fear looming, please explore them.

But you keep doing you either way, just voicing my concern after having browsed this thread off and on since its posting. I don't even read the rest of the board anymore, I just drop in to see if you've finished this every once and a while. My major concern is for the ironic case of blueballs you keep giving your readers.

To not end on a sour note, seriously good chapter. The porcupine scene was genuinely sweet. You captured childlike wonder in a real way. Even though we were all children once, that really isn't easy.


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Anonymous 16/06/22(Wed)14:37 No. 24379

arigato OP


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Anonymous 16/06/22(Wed)21:56 No. 24380

>>24373
just read up the whole thing in a few hours truly amazing writing even if repetitive at times. youve been doing this for four year that is so awesome i hope you can somehow increase the output rate but no pressure i just hope you actually finish the story soon i need closure hahaha


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Anonymous 16/06/22(Wed)23:49 No. 24381

>>24380
addition i just remembered i found it weird she apparently doesnt have her period yet maybe this could be incorporated in terms of realism


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/06/23(Thu)00:48 No. 24382

>>24381

She's loosely based on my wife, who didn't get hers until quite a bit later than her classmates. And yes, it's relevant to the plot.

In fact, late-bloomers were the norm until around WWI; in the 1800's, girls typically didn't get their first period until between the ages of 14 and 17. It's only in the last couple decades that most girls have been getting it as young as 8 or 9, and that's mainly from all the hormones and artificial estrogens that every fucking thing we eat is full of now; that's also why man boobs are a much more prevalent thing than in the past.

Diet and physical activity have more to do with it than anything else; a little girl who does gymnastics or ballet is going to get smaller breasts and later menarch than a girl who sits around the house all day eating Cheetos. Tell me you haven't noticed fat girls hit puberty sooner than skinny girls.

But yeah, there's a reason Sara's breasts are beginning to bud. Even in a story where it takes four years to write less than a year of events occurring, time still passes.

>>24378

There's also a reason I've dropped the "I'm going to hell for this" bit that used to be in every chapter. Partly because it got old, and partly because the character is moving beyond the point where he feels guilty for his inappropriate relationship with an 11 year old. I intended the change to be subtle, but apparently it was too subtle and nobody noticed the shift. Ah well.


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Anonymous 16/06/23(Thu)03:09 No. 24383

>>24382
That makes sense I guess. Surely it won't be 'pretty' once she gets her period but it will surely make for a nice bonding moment. Speaking of bonding, I noticed the only kisses there are are given to her forehead. I can't wait till they actually kiss each other and get even more intimate like that. But as you wrote, the week of the trip has only started. Anticipation is killing me hehe.


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Anonymous 16/06/26(Sun)17:54 No. 24389

So I'm new to /elit/ as a whole. I came here expecting poorly written wish-fulfillment smut about anything and everything. And then there was this. And now I'm just waiting for more. I mean, sure, I might poke around a bit more, but I honestly don't expect to find anything that can come close to this.
So good job Damocles, you've ruined an entire board for someone before they even got to sink their teeth into it.

Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to next chapter.


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Bkil 16/06/27(Mon)07:36 No. 24391

>>24389
Don't be so quick to think you won't be able to find anything comparable to this. There are quite a lot of good stories on this board, on asstr.org and other sites too.


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Anonymous 16/06/27(Mon)09:29 No. 24392

>>24391

Different person than who you're replying to. While I know what you're saying about asstr, it really sucks having to wade through all the shit.


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Anonymous 16/06/27(Mon)14:28 No. 24393

>>24392
Not to mention how shitty the navigation and search functions are


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Anonymous 16/06/27(Mon)15:26 No. 24394

>>24391
There's other good stories on this board, yes - but stories of this calibre are rare. I've been lurking here since 2007, and I can remember maybe two or three stories that made me keep coming back as much as this one.

The Book of David was one of them. Hate Sex and that story about the Bill Kaulitz-lookalike crossdressing emo kid kept me hungry for updates, too. But other than those, I can't remember anything else here that managed to hold my attention for more than a month.

And as >>24392 said: the asstr.org layout sucks.


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Anonymous 16/06/28(Tue)10:30 No. 24395

OP, please give this girl more orgasms for gods sake! I appreciate all you are doing, honestly I do, especially since ive been here since before i started college all the way up to my recent graduation. But come on m8, im getting tired of reading about how he always jizzes into her mouth! Give her more orgasms too. That shit is the absolute best stuff to read. Maybe even have him give HER oral or something? Just random ideas from an anon who likes his elit.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/06/29(Wed)15:49 No. 24399

I woke up with something heavy on top of me and blinked at the morning sunlight filtering through the nylon roof above me. Looking down I saw a tangle of Sara's light brown, almost blonde, hair sticking out the top of the sleeping bag, right where my chest was.

I slid one hand down her smooth back, cupping her butt and squeezing gently, and told her it was to get up. No response. I jostled her and repeated myself, a bit louder this time.

"Nn-nn."

"Yuh-huh. C'mon, time to get up, kiddo."

"Nnnn."

"Seriously, I really have to pee."

She stuck her head out of the sleeping bag, blinking sleepily, and dug her chin into my chest uncomfortably. After a moment, she responded, "I do too," but didn't make a move to get up.

I unzipped the two sleeping bags and peeled them apart, revealing her naked body lying on top of mine. She blushed adorably as she sat up, and I kissed her forehead and said, "good morning."

I slid on my socks and shoes while she dug around in the supplies for a bit, then grabbed her own shoes and socks and followed me out of the tent. For some reason she'd grabbed the roll of toilet paper I'd brought along; maybe she had to poop too.

I led her into the trees, selected a bush, and began peeing directly onto an ant hill I spotted beneath it, sighing in relief. Emptying your bladder really did feel almost as good as emptying your balls.

Sara went around to the other side of the bush and squatted down, spreading herself open with one hand. Then she turned that cute shade of red again when she noticed me looking and said, "don't look!"

"What? I see you naked all the time."

"I'm peeing!"

"So?"

"I can't go if you're watching me!"

I shrugged and turned around, enjoying the feel of the breeze rustling through the trees and blowing across my naked body and waited until she sounded finished. I turned back around to see her wrapping her hand in toilet paper until it resembled a baseball glove and stick it between her legs.

"What do you need so much toilet paper for?"

"You're not a girl; you wouldn't get it."

Well, that was a valid point. I watched her make two more catcher's mitts to wipe herself with, content with at least solving the mystery of why we went through toilet paper so quickly. It always seemed like my mother and sister could go through an entire roll in a single day, and this went a long way to explaining why.

Finished, I had Sara toss the roll back in the tent and asked what she wanted to do today.

"Let's go swimming!"

It was already getting warm and seemed like it was going to be hotter than the day before, so I thought this was an excellent idea. Leading her down to the pond, I stripped off my socks and shoes and stood on the little dock waiting as she did the same, remembering the last time we'd been here.

Both of us completely nude, I announced, "Race you!" and ran off the end of the dock, jumping in with a huge splash. Touching bottom, I quickly rose to the surface with a gasp and shook myself. It felt great!

Sara, meanwhile, had let me jump in all by myself and was carefully dipping one toe into the water.

"C'mon, it feels great!"

"No, it's cold!"

She sat down on the end of the dock and hesitantly dunked her feet into the water, then perched on the very edge slowly lowering herself in and making funny faces the entire time.

So naturally I grabbed her by the wrists and hauled her into the water.

She popped up laughing and slapped me on the chest, and we soon began swimming around the pond, splashing, and generally having a good time. We played around for a good hour or so before I sat on a big rock near the edge of the pond to catch my breath.

Sara waded over to join me and climbed into my lap, trying to find a ticklish spot and not succeeding much. I grabbed her by the hands and held her arms up above her head with one hand while my other hand went to work on her, tickling her all over. She writhed and giggled, straddling me to keep from falling deeper into the water while trying to escape my grasp. No such luck.

"Stooooop!" she said, still laughing. I relented and released her hands, and she lay against my chest, head on my shoulder, as she caught her breath, still grinning. I put my arms around her in a hug while she panted in my ear, still giggling every so often.

After she'd caught her breath, I found one of my hands wandering down her back, slipping over her thigh, and between her legs. She raised herself up a little to give me better access, and I gently rubbed my hand up and down her soft, pillowy labia.

After a minute or two of this, she settled down into my lap, making it hard to pet her, smiled, and said, "kiss me."

I gave her a peck on the forehead and she shook her head.

"No?"

I kissed the tip of her nose and she shook her head again. Not good enough. I kissed her on the cheek.

She tilted her chin up toward me, closed her eyes, and pursed her lips. Well, who am I to disappoint the little lady? I puckered up and planted my lips against hers, awkwardly mashing our noses together at first until I tilted my head slightly to one side.

C'mon, give me a break; I'd never given a girl a real kiss before. Hell, I'd never even been kissed by a girl before this, Sara included.

I broke off the kiss and she opened her eyes, grinning dreamily.

"I never had a real kiss before."

"That was my first real kiss too, kiddo."

She leaned in to embrace me again, then, to my surprise, began moving her hips; straddling me like she was, the length of my rapidly growing erection went right into her slit, flanked on either side by her labia, and she began rubbing herself up and down its length, grinding her pelvis against my dick as she dry humped me.

Well, as much as you can dry hump someone while shoulder-deep in a pond and her pussy is the bun to your hot dog. I'm sure there's a technical term for it, probably in German since they seem good at inventing terms for everything.

She bit her lip as she began grinding herself against my dick even harder, which was honestly a little uncomfortable for me but I wasn't about to complain. The contrast between her warm crotch and the cold water certainly made for an interest feeling. This only lasted another minute or so before she seemed to get frustrated and quit moving her hips though.

"Help me."

I put each hand under an armpit, flipped her around to face the other way, and then put my hand between her legs and began rubbing up and down her slit vigorously. I felt around and found where her clit was hiding, pinching its hood between my fingers as I began stroking her up and down, adding a little circular motion as I went.

Her legs hooked themselves around mine and she grabbed my free hand in both of hers, squeezing hard as her breathing turned into panting again. I picked up the pace and she started making this adorable little squeak as she panted, squirming in my lap, biting her lip as she began making high-pitched little moans.

I took my hand that wasn't busy playing roast beef DJ and began rubbing her left nipple with it. She squeezed my hand tighter, her squeaks and moans getting more constant, until she suddenly squeezed my legs hard with hers, arched her back, and let out a long, high moan in the back of her throat, holding it for several seconds before collapsing into my arms and panting for breath.

I stood and lifted her out of the water onto the dock, where she sprawled on the wooden planks, legs spread and crotch a dark red to match the lighter flush across her face. I climbed out and lay down next to her, belatedly remembering the towels I'd left in the tent. Oh well, we air dried last time, we could do it again.

She finally caught her breath and rolled over to hug me, so I put my arms around her and kissed her forehead again.

"Did that feel good?"

She nodded.

"That felt great."

"No problem, kiddo. I like it when you feel good."

I lay there for probably a good twenty minutes, watching the clouds slowly float by overhead between the branches of the trees, just holding her.

"I'm glad you're my boyfriend."

I looked down at her and she tilted her head up to look at me, her beautiful smile making her entire face light up like an angel's.

"I'm glad you're my girlfriend too."

"Kiss me again?"

"Sure."

She sat upright, and I sat up and and we awkwardly kissed each other on the lips again. She broke off first this time, giggling and looking at me with a little embarrassment.

"We'll practice that."

"Yeah."

"Meanwhile," I said, looking at my crotch pointedly, "think I can have a turn now?"

She nodded knowingly and took my still hard-as-a-rock penis into her mouth and went to work. I rested one hand on the back of her head as I leaned back, watching the clouds again as I felt the exquisite warmth and moistness of her perfect little mouth around my cock.

The blowjob felt great, but she wasn't going very deep this time, and when she didn't respond to my request I gently pushed her head down a little further on my dick. She stopped moving her head and waited until I quit pushing, then resumed sucking me off, remaining at the new depth.

"Good girl," I whispered. "Just a little faster."

She complied, paused briefly to take my dick out of her mouth and rotate her head (her neck was probably getting sore again), then resumed sucking at the faster speed. I closed my eyes and reveled in the sensation probably for another five minutes before I felt that tightness again.

"Ok sweetie, here it comes..."

She pulled all but the head out of her mouth and held it there as I came.

"Don't swallow yet."

"Mmm?"

"Lemme see."

She carefully pulled my dick the rest of the way out of her mouth and sat up, looking at me with a slightly puzzled expression, cheeks bulged comically.

"Say aaaaaah!"

"Aaaaaah!"

She opened her mouth wide and I saw my jizz all over her tongue. If I hadn't just blown my load, that would have given me an instant hard on again.

"Ok."

She swallowed and tackled me in a big bear hug, which I returned.

"Good job, sweetie."

We just lay there in each other's arms, looking up at the trees and the sky above them, reveling in the moment.

Finally, she lifted her head up and asked, "so where's the final boss?"

"What?"

"In Pokemon. You have to fight the guy from the original games, right? Where is he?"

"Um... Mount Silver."

"Ick. I hate caves. Getting Mewtwo was bad enough."

"Well, at least this one isn't full of Zubats."

"Thank God. I hate those things."

"Everyone does."

I slowly got to my feet and put my socks and shoes back on, while she followed suit, then we headed back to the tent, hand in hand.

This was certainly a weird relationship, but it was amazing how well we got along.


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Anonymous 16/06/29(Wed)21:00 No. 24400

>>24399
Thank you for the update, it's nice she got to orgasm but I gotta say overall I was a bit underwhelmed by this new part. It seems like just a repeat of older stories. I guess that's bound to happen considering this is written over the span of 4 years but it's still a bit disappointing. I guess now that I have to wait for updates instead of just constantly reading I expect more things to happen, stuff to progress faster. I still appreciate the update though and hope you'll continue writing.


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Anonymous 16/07/08(Fri)03:08 No. 24417

>>24399
Hell yeah! Thats what I'm taking about! Keep on keeping on, my brother. This is good stuff! Also, I think it's time for some oral on HER, don't you think?


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Anonymous 16/07/14(Thu)15:08 No. 24431

>>24417

Seconding this. I've actually been wondering when it will happen, as she really deserves it as well. I'm hoping it's worth all wait.


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Anonymous 16/07/16(Sat)17:59 No. 24443

>>24431
Im wondering how long the fans need to wait for an update! And also, where did everyone go? It seems this last update drew fewer people than usual... Dont lose your motivation though, OP! Keep on doin it! Don't stop!


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Anonymous 16/07/16(Sat)23:10 No. 24444

just gonna say much enjoyed


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Anonymous 16/07/18(Mon)00:38 No. 24456

The ass should fit right .


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Anonymous 16/07/21(Thu)10:01 No. 24472

>>24399

I came from a thread on librechan to read the rest of the story, as the ASSTR page did not have the whole thing there, but I have to say, Damocles, you are an amazing author. I know I'm just parroting what others have said, but I do like the way you handle your characters. They may not be completely fleshed out, but they sure are realistic and the slow burn on the "sex" is just perfect. I would agree with others, however that it does seem to be a bit repetitive, at least in the most recent submissions, but, you seem to be able to tie things together, so I trust that you have a plan with that.

Anyway, I wanted to say that this is an amazing story, probably ranking among the top five erotic stories that I've read. Everything feels 5 times more amazing because I can really put myself in place of the male main character and my imagination is so vivid about these settings and events. I really want to go visit the cabin out in the boonies (I imagine it's in the mountains, but I don't remember where exactly where it was). I have a 1080p visual of what Sara looks like. Everything is just so real and genuine, but I will say that the main character is one lucky son of a bitch. I probably would have been caught by this point.

I know it might take a while, but I'm bookmarking this page and checking every day. I'm excited for the next installment.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/07/29(Fri)01:32 No. 24515

>>24472

>the main character is one lucky son of a bitch

Heh. Heh heh. AAAAAAH-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!


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styxarcher 16/07/30(Sat)09:47 No. 24522

>>24515
OP just lost his mind... That or someone is getting fucked.


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Anonymous 16/07/30(Sat)13:00 No. 24524

>>24522
Considering all the foreshadowing that he's been doing since the very first post... D:

In b4 the story's very first penetration scene is going to involve Bubba (please OP, don't do that D:)


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Anonymous 16/07/31(Sun)14:48 No. 24530

Time to get raped by a dick the size of a coke can?


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Anonymous 16/08/01(Mon)02:38 No. 24533

>>24530
No, it'll be a nice and gentle love making, I'm sure. This is too cute to do otherwise.


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Anonymous 16/08/01(Mon)06:17 No. 24534

>>24533

No no, I was referring to a comment the protagonist made much earlier in the story. When he was still terrified of getting caught and ending up in jail, who would then get to meet Bubba, so to speak. Of course I hope for your outcome, but... yeah.


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styxarcher 16/08/07(Sun)12:07 No. 24560

>>24533
Aint nothing nice about bubba going in the back way.


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Anonymous 16/08/21(Sun)18:59 No. 24625

This needs a bump back to page one.

Also would love to see Sara get knocked up at the end of this


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Anonymous 16/08/24(Wed)01:46 No. 24629

>>24625
>knocked up
She's eleven. She's still flat-chested, and it's all but outright stated that she hasn't had her first period yet, either.

Unless the author's going to do a timeskip of several years, getting Sara pregnant would be unrealistic and generally a bad idea.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/08/24(Wed)09:31 No. 24631

>>24625

"Hey, my 11 year old sister is suddenly pregnant and you're the only dude around. You, uh, wouldn't know anything about it, would you?"

*protagonist dives through a window, suffering severe lacerations in the process, rolls to his feet, and takes off running for the countryside*

".... that didn't answer my question."


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Anonymous 16/08/24(Wed)09:55 No. 24632

No no no . No time travel. You add time travel and this whole god-damed so perfect of a story becomes the book " The Door Into Summer" by Robert A. Heinlein. Granted I love his work in sci-if but roommates is so much More than that!


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Anonymous 16/08/24(Wed)20:52 No. 24634

>>24631
is this canon now? xD


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Anonymous 16/08/25(Thu)03:28 No. 24635

We need more content in this thread!


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/08/26(Fri)04:56 No. 24641

>>24632

>confused feelings when someone compares your story about a college student molesting a prepubescent girl to Robert Heinlein, one of the most inspirational sci-fi authors of all time

On the one hand, it's flattering as hell. On the other hand, Heinlein was into some weird shit. Time Enough For Love was too much for me. Like, fucking your own opposite-gender underage clone? Going back in time and fucking your mother while she's pregnant with you? Nope! The farthest I'll go is a dude jizzing in a little girl's mouth, that's far enough for me, thanks.

>>24635

I'm working on it. I mostly write new chapters when I'm bored/feel the urge, so I gotta be in the right mood. Also, people are complaining that it's repetitive, which unfortunately is a necessary evil at this stage. I bet that by the time they're having sex on a regular basis, people will be complaining that, "ho hum, they're having sex again, so repetitive". Kinda kills my motivation to write, especially if most of the sexual activity going on in the immediate future consists of blowjobs and such before they move on to the next stage in their relationship.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/08/26(Fri)04:59 No. 24642

>>24641

I mean, when you were in high school, did you complain about how 'repetitive' it was if your girlfriend sucked your dick twice a week? Hell no, you came and you asked for another.

So if you're whacking off to this story like most people, what the hell are you complaining about? Sex scenes are sex scenes, they're not necessarily where most of the character and story development come from.


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Anonymous 16/08/26(Fri)05:39 No. 24643

>>24642
Problem is, this thread's been up for FOUR FUCKING YEARS at this point. What you write is good, but it's just too fucking slow.
Also, don't get snippy because people are criticising you. Be glad that there are people who care enough about your self-indulgent amateur pedo fapfiction to complain about the bits they don't like, in the hopes that it'll improve.

The absolute worst thing you can do is get arrogant and believe that your story is perfect and anybody who says otherwise is wrong. No story is ever perfect, every work of fiction has flaws and every writer has areas they can improve in, even if they've been writing for fifty goddamn years and won ALL the awards.

And you're goddamn right people will complain when they're going steady, because this is the fucking internet and people will complain about anything.


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Anonymous 16/08/26(Fri)08:25 No. 24644

>>24643
While I don't agree with how this guy went about it, his message is sincere and valid. Obviously you're doing this for free and we have no control over how you write it, however when the people who presumably have been reading your shit for the aforementioned years you've been writing it, it's probably not just to shit on you.

Sure, everything you've written so far has been a joy to read and fap to, no questions asked, but if you asked me "Would you prefer we do another blowjob chapter or one where we advance the sexual relationship?" I'm gonna go for the second, just like how if a guy was asked by his girlfriend if he wants another blowjob or does he wanna go all the way tonight, of course the motherfucker loved that blowjob. If it was the choice between blowjob or nothing of fucking course the guy would love to keep getting the blowjob. But between the blowjob and something new? Different story.

If it was up to the guy he'd be doing anal already. We naturally want more, want it to go farther, etc etc, are we gonna say "GIVE US VAGINAL SEX OR STOP WRITING" of course not, we're not retarded but if you wanna know what would make us even happier, we're telling ya. Are we gonna be happy with whatever you put out? Yeah if you keep up the quality you've been doing and it doesn't seem like you're suddenly gonna go to shit, we're gonna like it.


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Storyteller95 16/08/26(Fri)10:36 No. 24645

Unlike some other posters I'm not going to be an ass about it but I really hope that contrary to your early post you will eventually go further than him jizzing in her mouth. Take your own time getting there though as the long as the quality keeps being top notch. I'm sure there are people out there who think MY pacing between sex scenes is glacial.


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Ride the walrus. Anonymous coward 16/08/26(Fri)18:13 No. 24648

I cant disgree with above posters, LTReader, FTPoster. Comments like above are devoted readers venting re lack of progression of story. We love it and love wot u write. We sometimes check for updates daily . . . I'd love to see how many hits this page gets daily. </end rants>


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/08/28(Sun)06:40 No. 24653

>>24645

Oh, this train has a long way to go before the end of the line. I'm just making the pacing conform to realism and character development rather than something like this:

http://oglaf.com/perhaps/

http://oglaf.com/perhaps/2/

But anyway, since I'm only in moderate pain now and no longer medicated out the ass, I figure updates will occur more often and we can proceed at a somewhat faster pace.


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Anonymous 16/08/28(Sun)09:11 No. 24654

As long as the story is in liner intime I have no problem with it. It is realistic as far as the time frame goes, I mean honestly if he pushes it now she might not trust enough for more deeper context and content as the story progresses. And it's cute. Girls that age worry about image and love ,etc ,etc. And I'm at
Least 98% sure she knows the whole vitamin stick ( lame pun) is false provided this story is not in 1972 before computers. For real what kid does not have a smart phone and google these days. I have been watch this story for years...OP keep up the great work. As an ass man I know the value of waiting for something good.


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Anonymous 16/08/29(Mon)10:45 No. 24655

>>24653
Cool story bro. Seriously, had a great time reading.


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styxarcher 16/09/01(Thu)10:00 No. 24659

>>24653
I'm wondering how long does it take you to write a chapter? With editing and the like.


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Anonymous 16/09/01(Thu)22:17 No. 24660

Excellent story -- always worth the wait!


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Anonymous 16/09/06(Tue)05:28 No. 24665

Im dying for an update op!


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Anonymous 16/09/18(Sun)21:50 No. 24680

>>24653


This, dear OP, http://oglaf.com/blank-page/
comes to mind...


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styxarcher 16/10/04(Tue)07:58 No. 24701

>>24399
OPPPPPPPPP

We need you! Come back to us.


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Anonymous 16/10/08(Sat)09:23 No. 24707

Please come back to us OP


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/10/24(Mon)10:01 No. 24769

>>24701

Still alive, trying to get myself in the mood to write.

So do we want the story to move faster, or keep the same pace? This is as much about developing their relationship as it is about fap material.


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Anonymous 16/10/24(Mon)17:25 No. 24770

>>24769

fasterrrrrr, but not too fast either of course. There's been plenty of oral now, it's time to slowly move into some penetration.
Praise be upon you.


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Anonymous 16/10/25(Tue)19:04 No. 24778

>>24769
As far as their physical intimacy, I don't think it needs to progress any "faster." Some complications or explorations might be fun, such as a close-call with Bill almost discovering their secret, or learning about something new that Sara likes (sexually, or not). Ultimately, it is their relationship and circumstances that really make the story special.

I don't think most readers want you to "rush to the finish". I think we just wish you'd post more often!


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Anonymous 16/10/25(Tue)23:09 No. 24780

>>24769

I like the current pace I just wish there were more updates. I think we all understand you're busy with the apocalypse and all though.


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Anonymous 16/10/26(Wed)19:57 No. 24782

Still waiting around. God, I wish a new fucking update would happen.


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Anonymous 16/10/26(Wed)19:59 No. 24783

>>24769
I think we need to speed things up a little. The actual sex needs to end up happening after four years, don't you think? Or, you know, maybe he could give her some oral? Mix things up a little? Just my ideas. Hope to see an update at some point soon, OP!


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styxarcher 16/10/27(Thu)08:22 No. 24786

>>24769
Faster then now, but not to fast.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/11/01(Tue)07:56 No. 24790

>>24786

Ok, I'll speed up the pace of the story a little.

But not too much; after a certain point, the story will go much faster and I don't want it to be TOO rushed.

I've outlined the next chapter, just have to get in the writing mood to flesh it out and post it.


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Anonymous 16/11/03(Thu)01:28 No. 24796

>>24790
hey op, how old would sara be now???


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Anonymous 16/11/03(Thu)05:58 No. 24797

>>24796

Pretty sure, as of the last part, Sara is still explicitly described as 11. I don't think there have been any significant time skips at this point.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 16/11/04(Fri)06:42 No. 24798

>>24797

Correct. So far, less than a year has passed; the main character has gone through the first semester of his freshman year and is currently in spring break of his second semester.

Working on the new chapter now. Don't wait up.


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Anonymous 16/11/04(Fri)18:08 No. 24801

http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/and-then-they-fucked-yelling-bird

It doesn't have to leap into the territory the link goes, merely the slippery slope should escalate a touch.

She's been dry humped a bit previous, and just prior the "roast-beef DJ".

Maybe a single finger for her to ride? Gradually working her way up to two, and then maybe... just maybe...


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Anonymous 16/11/12(Sat)00:14 No. 24811

well since trump won i feel we deserve to see sara get fucked hard to prepare her for the real world.


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Anonymous 16/11/13(Sun)00:43 No. 24814

>>24811
Yeah, keep your horrible ideas to yourself buddy.

OP, please just stick to what you already had in mind. This is easily the best loli story on elit, and it'd be horrible if this would get ruined because of politics, Trump hysteria, or other kinds of bullshit.



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