>>21937
How about "the author is a lazy fuckstick who can't sit his ass down and write and if someone else comes along and takes over at least it's something rather than the stream of nothing we've had for two fucking months"

It's not gonna be the same. Just be patient. There are other stories to read in the meantime. Most stories that are 'taken over' lose their appeal in one chapter and ruin the original author's intention. Besides, other stories have waited longer for an update than this and they were brought back. Give him more time.

>>21938

How about the author doesn't owe anybody in this thread anything whatsoever? If you're so impatient in seeing this story finished, stop whining and finish it yourself. Otherwise stop whining.

>>21937
Ha ha ha, go fuck myself. Nope, instead I think I will just fuck you over with mundane, unimaginitive bullshit chapters. Flooding this thread with paragraph after paragraph forcing you to search for an OP post (if there should ever be one). All the while taking the shine and glimmer off the thread. In the end killing it , even if OP decides he wants to back, it will be a bastardized notion of it's former self. Cheer!

(USER WAS BANNED FOR BEING A FAGGOT)

Just make a new thread called "Unofficial Roommates continuation". People who don't like it can hide it.

Problem solved, shut up now everybody.

anyday now

>>21945
Thank the Mods. At least I know where to find justice when I lose faith in people.

>>21945
thx based mods

I think OP got stabbed by his ex-girlfriend again but this time OP done dead

>>20512
Maybe he actually got stuck in a post-apocalyptic world this time...

Off in the distance there appears an odd grouping of clouds. No, smoke, alternating in large and small groupings...

"Send new router."

maybe OP can give us a sign that he's still alive?

come my son

op is kill

Hey, OP. It's my birthday tomorrow. You should totally give us some kind of update on how you're doing. The best birthday present will be knowing that you are still alive in this barren, post-apocalyptic wasteland.

OPEEEEEEE

OP diddly done dead

>>22026
Shhh, be calm.
The OP will post when the time is right.
Notice that this thread has been running for almost two years without being abandoned?
Wait, re-read and browse other places.
The posts will keep comeing.

>>21993

I'm alive. I just haven't had any motivation or inspiration to write lately. Way I see it, if I force myself to write when I'm not feeling it, I write shit. So I'm gonna wait until the creative juices are flowing again.

>>22046

just knowing that you're alive is enough :)

>>22046
OP IS ALIVE, PRAISE JEBUS!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER OP

Remember: Our antagonist never finds 7chan.

Does that imply something, or are we just over-analytic bitches?

>>22083

Probably won't be too terribly long until the next bit is out; I'm feeling the creative juices stir again, but it's not quite there yet.

Way I see it, I can either agonize you guys by making you wait for long stretches for a good chapter, or I can force myself to write when I'm not feeling it and give you guys hack shit. I'd rather go for quality over quantity/speed.

Thanks for thinking of us mate. I would vote for that choice any day.

>>17319
Second that.

>>22096
>>22096
define terribly long

would deffo settle for hack shit tho. this aint the paris review of books

>>22114

Get a load of this pleb.

We have waited half a year soon, what is a week or a month more to us now? Quality is worth the wait.

>>22096
Dude, from one writer to another: you can't wait for inspiration to strike. It will never strike you if you're not already writing. Sit down and write. The disgusting perverts here are waiting with bated breath and throbbing erections for the rest of your story. Don't you want to give it to them?

back to the front with you!!!

>>22156
Why? Let it fucking die if he isn't going to update it. Let other authors who are active use the front page.

>>22180
we can never let this thread die, this thread has become a part of everyone who followed OP and his shenanigans. If this thread dies, we all die a little.

*clears throat*

TODAY.

>>22226

god bless your heart for what you're doing, man.

Ok, so my internet connection didn't let me do it yesterday. Hope this is good enough.

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I slid my hand down to her crotch and gently stroked her smooth, soft labia. Giggling, she announced, "that tickles!" I blew a raspberry and she responded in kind as I continued to softly caress her labia.

After a little while, I ran one finger across the little hint of her hood peeking out from between her lips and it was like a jolt went through her. She gasped, then laughed, blushing, and I grinned at her and continued with the slow, gentle stroking.

After another minute or two, she started to relax, her body melting into mine, as I continued rubbing.

"Do you like this?"

"It feels good," she declared, holding my free hand in both of hers. I gently kissed her on the forehead, which was as far as I could reach while positioned like this, and told her to close her eyes. She complied, trusting me implicitly.

I had a little girl's unquestioning trust, and I was abusing it like this. Afterward, I could see the newspaper headlines about how I was the worst kind of criminal scum for 'corrupting the innocence of a child', but at the moment I didn't think about anything but... this. This one moment of paradise. I had a beautiful young girl who trusted me, liked me, thought I was cool, and she made me feel good. Now it was my turn to make her feel as good as she made me feel, and I intended to return the favor.

I gradually increased the speed of my stroking, watching her labia stretch, squish, and move as I rubbed them. I got closer and closer to the center until I was rubbing down her soft, moist slit, her hood between my fingers. I'm not entirely certain, but I think the way I was doing it was putting pressure on her clitoris without stimulating it directly. She was certainly responding positively.

Her face was flushed and her breathing was fast and shallow, eyes squeezed shut. A soft moan escaped her lips and I intensified my rubbing a little more. She arched her hips slightly, giving my hand better access to her holiest of holies, and I looked away from her face to... whoa.

Her crotch was pink, not pale white like marble. Could crotches blush? I was just starting to realize this meant she was actually aroused by what I was doing, when my middle finger made another pass through her slit and came out warm and... slimy.

It took a second for me to figure that out, and I did the dumbest thing possible at that moment.

I stopped stroking her crotch, looked at my hand, and announced in a surprised voice, "You're wet!"

Sara's eyes shot open, her legs snapped shut, and she practically levitated off the bed, running out of the room before I even realized what was happening. The door to her room slammed shut before I even got out of my bed.

I knocked on the door and asked if she was all right and got no response. After a few moments of awkwardly standing naked outside a little girl's bedroom, I went back into my room, retrieved her shirt and panties, and stuck them in the laundry hamper.

Then I got dressed and sat down on the couch wondering what the hell just happened and vaguely aware that I'd screwed up somehow.

>>22233


4 months later and we only get 500 words

But thanks for the update.

Did she think she peed? What a cutie.

>>22233

I sincerely hope there's more and you're just teasing us

>>22233

op pls, enough is enough.

>>17319
op i need another fix

>>22238

I don't really care about the length, so much as the "unexpected plot twist." To be honest, it felt a little forced, and it seems specifically manufactured to troll the audience. From a writing perspective, I don't think the main character would have naturally been so clumsy/dumb and ruin something like that with talking. He might have thought it, but I'm sure the pressure of not wanting to get caught and wanting everything to go well would have been more than enough.

But yeah, it was also way too short.

>>22233

I think the conflict is easily understandable. She didn't really understand that she would get wet and was embarrassed when he mentioned it. She may even think that he thought she was peeing.

It doesn't seem to be the sort of thing that would sustain a lot of tension for very long. With Sara not providing the sexual tension she had earlier in the story, you'll need another source. The only other character in the story is her brother. He's set up perfectly, but some of those chapters may not be fun.

>>22251

Dunno how forced it can be, given the foreshadowing from previous instances where she suddenly ran off while he was touching her. He just got surprised, blurted out the wrong thing, and she wigged out.

More will come, when and as I'm inspired to write. What with changing jobs, having to deal with health issues and going to court over my psycho ex, I've been really wrung out over the last couple months and need to recharge the batteries.

But I'm starting to feel the urge to write again...

>>22274


That's great. This is a good story, and it deserves to be written. I wouldn't take criticism too seriously though. I like the story, and while I was a little disappointed at the last chapter, (a little short, and yeah, I kind of wanted to see more happen than really did), I'm still thrilled to see where it goes! Keep it up! Fans are waiting!

interesing...

Bump for more

more

Just found this thread today, and oh my god. This is the best piece of elit I've ever read. OP, please keep doing what you're doing and don't listen to anyone else. I LOVE the slow pace and hints of romance. Will be checking this thread every day now. Also, as a self proclaimed artist I took the liberty to make a few sketches of the scenes from your story.

Well I just went to make a document for this story, and its almost 35k. Has anyone else made a document and is it online? Because if so you may want to link it.

Also OP if you ever make a asstr account LINK IT! I want to follow you, if I knew where you lived I would be following you IRL.

>>22353

My story has fan art?

Let's see it.

I haven't posted yet, but I've been following for over a month. It's a great story, and there's so much promise, but just when things start to get good, we get a tease and then no posts for what feels like FOREVER. OP, we all love this story, but now it seems like we'll never get a next chapter, let alone a conclusion. We want you to finish, and I understand not feeling in the mood to write, but if you ever do, we're here waiting with heavily-baited breath, and heavily-breathed bating. Please finish, OP. We believe in you.

Nice

So... I've just used half a night to read the entire story so far, and I must say, that this is literary gold... The story and the characters are very in depth, and the progression is very binding! Can't wait to see an update for this! We believe in you OP!

more

So we have two types of people viewing this thread:
Those who just arrived on scene and are very enthusiastic;
And those who have given up hope and just generally lurks around the thread.

>>22480
and yet it feels like such a short time ago when I still had hope

>>22480
Get out of my head.

Where is OP

>>22362
Will posting my art inspire OP to write more?

>>17319
yes

>>22492
Do you, the artist, consider it mediocre or offputting? If not , then post it.

>>22492
Do you, the artist, consider it mediocre or offputting? If not , then post it.

>>22494
>>22495
Can you delete that double post, it's really bothering me every time I check in,

If he does delete it, then I look like an idiot.

>>22533
Anonymous often looks like an idiot. Don't fret about it.

>>22492
Can't post art in this. Tried.

>>22541

Try posting in /cake/ and putting a link here.

you must stay alive!!!!

>>22542
Do this!

i need me some fish

I need me some more delicious story.

"Whoo-hoo-hoo, look who knows so much! It just so happens that your friend here is only mostly dead. There's a big difference between mostly dead and all dead. Mostly dead is slightly alive." - Miracle Max, The Princess Bride

>>22684

This a kiss book?

>>22684
woo-hoo, op confirmed alive. next part coming in the next 18-60 months

(I'm just joking, op. take your time, we're all looking forward to it. good to see you still alive — even if slightly — in the nuclear, loli-less wasteland.)

great to hear you're back in the grove op

I meant 'groove' of course

>>21538
If only the wasteland had mutant lolis, you might think of ideas for writing.

interesting OP

>>22684
Please make us a christmas gift, OP!

>>22895

Ok.

Seriously OP, it's the romance that makes this story. Forget all the criticism and take it as slow as you want. I'm pretty sure we all ship these two at this point.

>>22684
just got here yesterday so i get to join the eagerly waiting for updates club.
great story OP. though i am looking at the dates between posts and now wishing this story was pretyped.

>>23005
yeah, you're in for one hell of a wait, man. totally worth it, though.

dammit.... i caught up.

>>22492

So where's this fan art?

>>23019

I second this motion.

Great writing skills OP. It's too bad that you aren't able to progress consistently, but I defitely get you.
Personaly I have the same problem with drawing. When inspired I can come up with great ideas and just draw, but when I can't picture the idea I just can't create anything. And like you, forcing it results in mediocre crap.
Anyway, keep working at it, this is great stuff you're putting out.

>>23019
I don't know. Where's the rest of the story, you lazy cocksucker?

>>23036
In a post-apocalyptic limbo with OP, duh.

>>23037
I keep waiting for OP to run into the organization that masterminded the apocalypse, and I am continually disappointed that he never does.

Just started reading your story OP and it took me about 7 hours to read it...not sure if its cause I suck at english/reading or the excitement(then running around the room, shouting and making odd noises, followed by masturbating) delayed me most of that time, tho i think its a little of both...so good job on keeping me awake, you have given me reason to not leave my computer, and for that, I thank-you.

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, SOMEONE GET OP A LOLI!!! Maybe it will help inspire something...

>>23041
Because reminding OP of how we masturbate to his writing is such inspirational motivation.

>>23042 Honestly never fapped to this story. But I have enjoyed reading it immensely.
OP's writing style makes it very easy to picture the entire thing, and it all seems so plausible. He really brings the story too life, and he writes with enough descriptive language that I feel like someone could base an animation on his writing.

I think it was just bait for more story. OP keep writing. I do not think you have any idea the fans you have created.

>>23075
You don't have to be rude about it.

If the author doesn't post more then we already have a great story. I don't think wishing them to die is good motivation.

i blew the biggest load reading this, pretty hard to fap and read

dont loose hope folks, op will lead us to glory

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gur8ccqrQ9c

I crouch in the corner, tense, heart pounding, trying not to hyperventilate. The waiting, the anticipation, always gets to me. I quietly thumb back the hammer.

The bandit, bearded and smelling like unwashed hobo crotch, walks into the room, clearly expecting it to be empty. He has a momentary look of surprise before I fire a 26.5mm flare into his chest.

Taking two MRE crackers and a ration bar, I make s'mores over the crackling fire burning in his chest cavity. Then, satisfied that my perimeter is once again secure, I sit down with my snack and futilely wipe dust and grease from the dim monitor before me.

Then I crack my knuckles and the ancient keyboard begins clacking.

IT IS TIME.

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Gentlemen, I have begun the next chapter of Roommates. I need to refresh my memory of where I'm at in the story; once that's finished, your patience shall be rewarded.

Yes, the mood is upon me once again: time to write.

>>23042

Well, it's flattering, at any rate. It means I write a sexy story.

Better get to it.

Bless you OP!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0VkrUG3OrPc
This, except with a sexier monster of a story on the table instead.

Newest chapter is 80% complete. Figured I'd give you all an update so you don't feel like I'm jerking your chain.

>>23164
bless your radioactive waste-filled heart, OP.

I cannot wait for the update, bless you op