>>21588
Mmmhmm.

You know what I just realized. This fucker hasn't even KISSED her yet! (on the lips of course.)

>>21600


So does he have the next part ready and just isn't posting, or... what?

>>21636
That sums up the situation nicely.

>>21636
>>21638
In other words: Yes.

Honesty, who WOULDN'T get a kick out of making their fans wait? NO ONE, that's who. That is the way that writers work, have worked, and always WILL work.

I wasn't saying that the story isn't good. I was just offering constructive criticism. Believe it or not that is what makes a good writer. He has had tons of positive feedback and with that he has continued on using things that we have all express positive feedback to. While negative feedback may not be as easy to hear, it is equally as important. Maybe I represent the minority, or maybe there are others that agree. Maybe even OP to some extent and with that information goes in to produce an amazing next chapter.

>>21646
I've been a vocal supporter of this story since the first chapter, and I'm with this guy.

>>21651
I don't think there is any harm in giving constructive criticism. Anyone who is ready to show other people their work needs to be ready to hear ways that they can improve. My big issue is that I'd like so see more, because the last section was very, very short. It's good stuff, but it was barely enough to fap to.

Sorry, having to rewrite the second half of this chapter because of how terrible it turned out.

Also, not very motivated to do much of anything lately.

>>21678
op pls

>>21678

we all understand nuclear winter is rough, OP, but you're busting our balls here

Technically, we are bustin HIS balls about not writing.

anyday now