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Anonymous 13/11/03(Sun)04:52 No. 20063

First time I've ever been on this board, and this was the only thread that piqued my interest. I thank you, good sir, for your amazing accomplishments of the literary arts, and I hope to fucking god he bangs Sara some time soon like the little slut she is.


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Anonymous 13/11/03(Sun)13:29 No. 20066

Seriously the best work here. But some real difficulties or problems for the characters to run into could help give the story more substance. A story with some conflict could enhance the adventure.


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Anonymous 13/11/03(Sun)13:30 No. 20067

Seriously the best work here. But some real difficulties or problems for the characters to run into could help give the story more substance. A story with some conflict could enhance the adventure.


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Anonymous 13/11/04(Mon)04:22 No. 20077

>>17319
20067
What do you mean? the guy is scared shitless that he is going to get caught and end up in a never ending ass raping prison!


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 13/11/04(Mon)07:20 No. 20081

>>20077

And we're only just starting!

Hasn't there been enough foreshadowing?


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Anonymous 13/11/06(Wed)03:47 No. 20109

>>20081

Bumping. You, sir, need to stay on the front page.


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Anonymous 13/11/10(Sun)03:33 No. 20150

Bamp.



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